Batman 3B
Creature - Human Pilot Ally {R}
When ~ enters the battlefield, you may search your library for Batmobile, reveal it, put it into your hand, then shuffle your library. 1B, T: You may put Batmobile from your hand onto the battlefield.
3/4
Batmobile 3
Tribal Artifact - Vehicle Ally {MR}
Indestructible
While ~ is a creature, tapped Ally permanents you control are indestructible.
~ can only be crewed by Ally creatures.
Crew 3
2/3
Robin 3G
Creature - Human Soldier Ally {R}
Vigilance
When ~ enters the battlefield from being cast, you can put an Ally permanent with converted mana cost 4 or less from your hand onto the battlefield.
3/3
Bat Signal 1R
Sorcery {C}
Search your library for an Ally card, reveal it, put it into your hand, then shuffle your library.
Superman 4WWW
Creature - Kryptonian Warrior Ally {R}
Flying, indestructible 3W, discard ~: Target Ally creature gets +6/+0 and flying and indestructible until end of turn.
6/5
Mr. Freeze 5UUU
Creature - Human Ally {R}
~ gets +X/+0 where X is your devotion to blue.
When ~ dies, destroy all creatures you don't control.
3/5
I like Batman, but I think Batman has so much more than just the batmobile. Maybe if his ability could search for a variety of artifacts that he uses throughout his lore?
Wow, I'm so glad I checked in on this thread. Haven't visited the Card Creation forum in about a year or more. I actually created (and nearly finished) a DC Comics vs Yu Yu Hakusho crossover set. Even started writing the story for it and everything. Kind of lost interest in it because I wasn't getting enough feed back on the designs and no one seemed particularly interested: . There are many, many other cards in the set aside from those listed in the link I've provided. I like that you've focused on Ally as a sub-theme, but I'm not sure some of the flavor matches. For instance, I understand why the Batmobile would give Allies indestructible (because flavorwise, they're technically crewing the vehicle). But I don't understand why discarding a Superman card would give Allies flying and indestructible. Or why Mr. Freeze dying would destroy all creatures you don't control. Destroy creature board wipe effects are strictly limited to B and W. U has very few destroy effects, and is typically limited to one creature, with a replacement effect generally following that. It would work better both flavor and mechanically if read something like:
When Mr. Freeze dies, tap all creatures your opponents control. They do not untap during their controller's next untap step.
Flavorwise this works because tapping creatures is a big part of U's color chart identity, and is usually depicted in magic cards as freezing creatures in place.
Re-uploaded just a few of my designs. You should be able to see them on mobile as well. My focus with Batman is more on his gadgets. My design notes read as follows:
Batarangs: So essentially this card acts as a 5 mana Arc Lightning (4, if you control Batman, Silent Vigilante) that can be used at instant speed. The current artwork was chosen because it depicts Batman throwing mutiple batarangs at a single, or possibly multiple targets.
Batman, Silent Vigilante: Batman, Silent Vigilante was the third character I created and was the most interesting to design for. From the onset, I wanted to concentrate on the various equipment cards I'm creating for him. I also wanted to focus on his martial arts skills as well. I made him a 2/3 with the idea flavor-wise being that regular humans would be 1/1's that would be no match for him in a fight. 2/1 or 2/2 humans would be skilled martial artists that could hold their own in a fight, but would ultimately fall to Batman's superior fighting skills. Hence Batman being unblock-able against them and having a 3 toughness so that they aren't capable of killing him on their own without some kind of equipment or pump spell.
Now for the name... Silent Vigilante isn't set in stone. Right now, it's the name I like the most. I've always liked the more stealthier aspects of Batman, owing mostly to his ninja training. Historically, real life ninja's were able to conceal numerous weapons on their person without them being seen. Flavor-wise, I think I've accomplished this. Also, I made Batman a ninja instead of a rogue because, although Batman operates outside of the law, he doesn't engage in any illicit activities. Calling him the "Caped Crusader" or the "Dark Knight" would have been flavor fails in my opinion as well because they don't embody what the card is designed to do.
I think it's fairly obvious why I went WUB with him: Mechanically, he's W for his ability to tutor and equip equipment for cheap, U for his unblock-ability, and B for intimidate (c'mon he's Batman, when is he ever not intimidating someone?). Ideologically, he also has a strong sense of justice W, is a brilliant planner and tactician U, and is not above hurting and maiming people to get what he wants B
Bladed Gauntlets: This card is Bladed Bracers for the same mana cost, but without the angel creature type clause.
Explosive Batarangs: This card is Pyroclasm for 4 (3, if you control Batman, Silent Vigilante) that can be used at instant speed.
Creature - Human Pilot Ally {R}
When ~ enters the battlefield, you may search your library for Batmobile, reveal it, put it into your hand, then shuffle your library.
1B, T: You may put Batmobile from your hand onto the battlefield.
3/4
Batmobile 3
Tribal Artifact - Vehicle Ally {MR}
Indestructible
While ~ is a creature, tapped Ally permanents you control are indestructible.
~ can only be crewed by Ally creatures.
Crew 3
2/3
Robin 3G
Creature - Human Soldier Ally {R}
Vigilance
When ~ enters the battlefield from being cast, you can put an Ally permanent with converted mana cost 4 or less from your hand onto the battlefield.
3/3
Bat Signal 1R
Sorcery {C}
Search your library for an Ally card, reveal it, put it into your hand, then shuffle your library.
Superman 4WWW
Creature - Kryptonian Warrior Ally {R}
Flying, indestructible
3W, discard ~: Target Ally creature gets +6/+0 and flying and indestructible until end of turn.
6/5
Mr. Freeze 5UUU
Creature - Human Ally {R}
~ gets +X/+0 where X is your devotion to blue.
When ~ dies, destroy all creatures you don't control.
3/5
Dunes of Zairo
SHANDALAR
Innistrad - The Darkest Night
~THE RAVNICAN CONSORTIUM~
A Community Set
Commander: Allies & Adversaries
When Mr. Freeze dies, tap all creatures your opponents control. They do not untap during their controller's next untap step.
Flavorwise this works because tapping creatures is a big part of U's color chart identity, and is usually depicted in magic cards as freezing creatures in place.
Batarangs: So essentially this card acts as a 5 mana Arc Lightning (4, if you control Batman, Silent Vigilante) that can be used at instant speed. The current artwork was chosen because it depicts Batman throwing mutiple batarangs at a single, or possibly multiple targets.
Batman, Silent Vigilante: Batman, Silent Vigilante was the third character I created and was the most interesting to design for. From the onset, I wanted to concentrate on the various equipment cards I'm creating for him. I also wanted to focus on his martial arts skills as well. I made him a 2/3 with the idea flavor-wise being that regular humans would be 1/1's that would be no match for him in a fight. 2/1 or 2/2 humans would be skilled martial artists that could hold their own in a fight, but would ultimately fall to Batman's superior fighting skills. Hence Batman being unblock-able against them and having a 3 toughness so that they aren't capable of killing him on their own without some kind of equipment or pump spell.
Now for the name... Silent Vigilante isn't set in stone. Right now, it's the name I like the most. I've always liked the more stealthier aspects of Batman, owing mostly to his ninja training. Historically, real life ninja's were able to conceal numerous weapons on their person without them being seen. Flavor-wise, I think I've accomplished this. Also, I made Batman a ninja instead of a rogue because, although Batman operates outside of the law, he doesn't engage in any illicit activities. Calling him the "Caped Crusader" or the "Dark Knight" would have been flavor fails in my opinion as well because they don't embody what the card is designed to do.
I think it's fairly obvious why I went WUB with him: Mechanically, he's W for his ability to tutor and equip equipment for cheap, U for his unblock-ability, and B for intimidate (c'mon he's Batman, when is he ever not intimidating someone?). Ideologically, he also has a strong sense of justice W, is a brilliant planner and tactician U, and is not above hurting and maiming people to get what he wants B
Bladed Gauntlets: This card is Bladed Bracers for the same mana cost, but without the angel creature type clause.
Explosive Batarangs: This card is Pyroclasm for 4 (3, if you control Batman, Silent Vigilante) that can be used at instant speed.
Grappling Hook: This card is Flight for 2.