Names are tentative Discounter (You may remove a counter of any type from a player or permanent)
Discounter Big Draw3UU
Instant (R)
Draw three cards, then discounter thrice.
Discounter Specter1BB
Creature - Specter (R)
Flying
Whenever Discounter Specter deals combat damage to a player, that player discards a card and you discounter.
2/2
Garruk, Really Pushed1GG
Legendary Planeswalker - Garruk (MR)
+1] Target creature gets +1/+1 and your choice of vigilance or trample until end of turn.
-2] Create a 2/2 green Wolf creature token.
-XX] Search your library for X creature cards, shuffle your library, and put the cards on top of your library in any order.
(3)
Red Arena Dragon1BBR
Enchantment Creature - Dragon
Flying
At the beginning of your upkeep, exile the top card of your library. You may play it until end of turn. You lose 1 life.
4/4
Red VisionR
Enchantment (R)
At the beginning of your upkeep, you may sacrifice Red Vision. If you do exile the top card of your library for each Redred counter on Ref Vision, you may play the exiled cards until end of turn. If you do not, put a Redred counter on Red Vision.
Green Rot1BG
Sorcery (R)
Target opponent discards a card, if he or she cannot, create a 2/2 black Horror creature token.
Target opponent discards a card, if he or she cannot, create a 2/2 black Horror creature token.
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MtG is where you can hate white players or black players, and still not be racist.
Drop the "You may" from Discounter Reminder text and include it on the cards. Current way is two words less but is cleaner the way I suggest IMO (one word less in the Specter's case). Seems though that those two words matter a good deal to you if you're going with thrice. Yep, we all know what thrice means but, unless it's just placeholder for this post, it sounds funny. Nothing wrong with it though
The Garrick's ultimate is new with -XX. I immediately thought of Uncage the Menagerie for some reason even though they aren't similar. Somehow they feel the same to me because it feels like an onslaught of creatures. I like it. I really like this Garruk. -2 give me a wolf. +1 attack with vigilance. -2 get the perfect creature I need and still have a wolf? Yep! It honestly feels like a great walker. Other scenario: +1 and hopefully I have a creature already. Then, -4 to get two creatures on top? It's a fair deal. Your opponent has all the information and you have no draw choices for next two turns. 3 cmc is perfect. I'd have the +1 give both abilities.
Red Arena Dragon would see play. Moving on. Love the tentative name btw.
Red Vision. Hmm. Seems good. Feels red. It's a card that is hard for me to comment on. I don't understand these effects well enough to say anything useful.
Green Rot1BG
Sorcery
Target player discards two card. You create a 2/2 black Horror creature token for each card not discarded this way.
How that ^? Oh okay now I see. It can target two different players
It never refers to cards remaining in player's hand. If a player has 1 card in hand and can only discard 1 then you'd create 1 token. Care to comment on the other cards at all?
It never refers to cards remaining in player's hand.
It refers to the cards not discarded this way, so of the five cards in their hand three were not discarded. It's a legitimate reading of the text you suggest - which is an ambiguity issue your proposed wording introduces that was not there before.
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Planar Chaos was not a mistake neither was it random. You might want to look at it again.
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Discounter (You may remove a counter of any type from a player or permanent)
Discounter Big Draw 3UU
Instant (R)
Draw three cards, then discounter thrice.
Discounter Specter 1BB
Creature - Specter (R)
Flying
Whenever Discounter Specter deals combat damage to a player, that player discards a card and you discounter.
2/2
Garruk, Really Pushed 1GG
Legendary Planeswalker - Garruk (MR)
+1] Target creature gets +1/+1 and your choice of vigilance or trample until end of turn.
-2] Create a 2/2 green Wolf creature token.
-XX] Search your library for X creature cards, shuffle your library, and put the cards on top of your library in any order.
(3)
Red Arena Dragon 1BBR
Enchantment Creature - Dragon
Flying
At the beginning of your upkeep, exile the top card of your library. You may play it until end of turn. You lose 1 life.
4/4
Red Vision R
Enchantment (R)
At the beginning of your upkeep, you may sacrifice Red Vision. If you do exile the top card of your library for each Redred counter on Ref Vision, you may play the exiled cards until end of turn. If you do not, put a Redred counter on Red Vision.
Green Rot 1BG
Sorcery (R)
Target opponent discards a card, if he or she cannot, create a 2/2 black Horror creature token.
Target opponent discards a card, if he or she cannot, create a 2/2 black Horror creature token.
The Garrick's ultimate is new with -XX. I immediately thought of Uncage the Menagerie for some reason even though they aren't similar. Somehow they feel the same to me because it feels like an onslaught of creatures. I like it. I really like this Garruk. -2 give me a wolf. +1 attack with vigilance. -2 get the perfect creature I need and still have a wolf? Yep! It honestly feels like a great walker. Other scenario: +1 and hopefully I have a creature already. Then, -4 to get two creatures on top? It's a fair deal. Your opponent has all the information and you have no draw choices for next two turns. 3 cmc is perfect. I'd have the +1 give both abilities.
Red Arena Dragon would see play. Moving on. Love the tentative name btw.
Red Vision. Hmm. Seems good. Feels red. It's a card that is hard for me to comment on. I don't understand these effects well enough to say anything useful.
Sorcery
Target player discards two card. You create a 2/2 black Horror creature token for each card not discarded this way.
How that ^? Oh okay now I see. It can target two different players
So if they have five cards in hand, they discard two cards and you get three tokens?
Finally a good white villain quote: "So, do I ever re-evaluate my life choices? Never, because I know what I'm doing is a righteous cause."
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Remnants: Valheim
Legendary Journey: Heroes & Planeswalkers
Saga: Shards of Rabiah
Legends: The Elder Dragons
Read up on Red Flags & NWO
It refers to the cards not discarded this way, so of the five cards in their hand three were not discarded. It's a legitimate reading of the text you suggest - which is an ambiguity issue your proposed wording introduces that was not there before.
Finally a good white villain quote: "So, do I ever re-evaluate my life choices? Never, because I know what I'm doing is a righteous cause."
Factions: Sleeping
Remnants: Valheim
Legendary Journey: Heroes & Planeswalkers
Saga: Shards of Rabiah
Legends: The Elder Dragons
Read up on Red Flags & NWO
More generally, as currently written Discounter is potent anti-poison tech, which isn't supposed to happen according to modern design sensibilities.
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