Lord of the Pure5WW
Legendary Creature - Praetor (R)
When ~ enters the battlefield, return target noncreature card from your graveyard to your hand.
Other creatures you control get +1/+1. 1W, Sacrifice a creature: Counter target spell or ability that targets a noncreature permanent you control.
5/5
Duke of Ingenuity5UUU
Legendary Creature - Praetor (R)
When ~ enters the battlefield, each player shuffles their hand into their library and draws five cards.
You have Hexproof.
During your end step, draw cards until you have the same number of cards in your hand as an opponent.
5/5
Count of Suffering5BBB
Legendary Creature - Praetor (R)
Whenever an opponent draws a card, that player loses 1 life.
During your turn, sources you don’t control can’t cause your life total to change.
When ~ leaves the battlefield, each opponent sacrifices a permanent of each type.
5/5
Baron of Punishment4RR
Legendary Creature - Praetor (R)
Players can’t gain life and damage can’t be prevented.
When ~ leaves the battlefield, it deals 5 damage to each opponent. 1R: ~ deals 1 damage to target creature. If that creature dies this turn, you may draw a card, then discard a card.
5/5
Prince of Fortitude5GG
Legendary Creature - Praetor (R)
Whenever a creature you control would be destroyed, regenerate it.
Creatures you control can’t be blocked except by two or more creatures. 3G: Target creature you control fights another target creature.
5/5
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Artifact - Equipment (R)
Choose one - Equipped creature gets +4/+0; or Double Strike; or "When this creature deals combat damage to a creature, exile that creature"; or t, unattach ~ from this creature: ~ deals 5 damage to target creature." t: Equipped creature gains flying until end of turn.
Equip 3
Lord of the Pure's ETB trigger could probably just stand to put the creature onto the battlefield. Neither of the other two abilities are particularly stellar, anyways.
Duke of Ingenuity's triggers are a nonbo. The ETB trigger makes the third ability really unlikely to generate card advantage unless you can somehow follow your 8 drop up by playing lots of cards. Player Hexproof is also not a blue ability. Every single card that does so is either white or colorless, and the flavor involved in giving players hexproof is entirely different than when creatures have the ability.
I just don't get Count of Suffering at all. Its abilities are all disjoined, and the second ability does absolutely nothing on its own. Did you intend it as a super-clunky way to get more out of Dark Confidant? A black card preventing you from paying life also seems really bad and off-color.
Baron of Punishment's triggered ability should be an ETB trigger so it can at least take advantage of its own static ability. The rummanging ability is also a head-scratcher.
Prince of Fortitude is the best design here by far. Its abilities work well together, and it actually feels like it's worth 7 mana.
As stated, Baron of Punishment's trigger should be ETB. Further, the draw-then-discard part of its activated ability stacks with multiple activations, so if you ping the same creature 3 times before it dies you will draw, discard, draw, discard, draw, then discard again. Red also tends to discard and then draw, but that's a minor nitpick.
Also agreed that Count of Suffering feels disjointed.
Legendary Creature - Praetor (R)
When ~ enters the battlefield, return target noncreature card from your graveyard to your hand.
Other creatures you control get +1/+1.
1W, Sacrifice a creature: Counter target spell or ability that targets a noncreature permanent you control.
5/5
Duke of Ingenuity 5UUU
Legendary Creature - Praetor (R)
When ~ enters the battlefield, each player shuffles their hand into their library and draws five cards.
You have Hexproof.
During your end step, draw cards until you have the same number of cards in your hand as an opponent.
5/5
Count of Suffering 5BBB
Legendary Creature - Praetor (R)
Whenever an opponent draws a card, that player loses 1 life.
During your turn, sources you don’t control can’t cause your life total to change.
When ~ leaves the battlefield, each opponent sacrifices a permanent of each type.
5/5
Baron of Punishment 4RR
Legendary Creature - Praetor (R)
Players can’t gain life and damage can’t be prevented.
When ~ leaves the battlefield, it deals 5 damage to each opponent.
1R: ~ deals 1 damage to target creature. If that creature dies this turn, you may draw a card, then discard a card.
5/5
Prince of Fortitude 5GG
Legendary Creature - Praetor (R)
Whenever a creature you control would be destroyed, regenerate it.
Creatures you control can’t be blocked except by two or more creatures.
3G: Target creature you control fights another target creature.
5/5
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Artifact - Equipment (R)
Choose one - Equipped creature gets +4/+0; or Double Strike; or "When this creature deals combat damage to a creature, exile that creature"; or t, unattach ~ from this creature: ~ deals 5 damage to target creature."
t: Equipped creature gains flying until end of turn.
Equip 3
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[OMC] Omerium's Collapse
Duke of Ingenuity's triggers are a nonbo. The ETB trigger makes the third ability really unlikely to generate card advantage unless you can somehow follow your 8 drop up by playing lots of cards. Player Hexproof is also not a blue ability. Every single card that does so is either white or colorless, and the flavor involved in giving players hexproof is entirely different than when creatures have the ability.
I just don't get Count of Suffering at all. Its abilities are all disjoined, and the second ability does absolutely nothing on its own. Did you intend it as a super-clunky way to get more out of Dark Confidant? A black card preventing you from paying life also seems really bad and off-color.
Baron of Punishment's triggered ability should be an ETB trigger so it can at least take advantage of its own static ability. The rummanging ability is also a head-scratcher.
Prince of Fortitude is the best design here by far. Its abilities work well together, and it actually feels like it's worth 7 mana.
Also agreed that Count of Suffering feels disjointed.
The other three look good.
- Rabid Wombat