Roman Chariot 4
Artifact -- Vehicle (U)
When Roman Chariot enters the battlefield, create a 1/1 white Soldier creature token.
Crew 2 Soldiers can crew Roman Chariot
4/5
Mechanical Horse 1W
Artifact -- Vehicle (C)
First strike
Crew 2 Knights can crew Mechanical Horse
3/2
The lines in bold are supposed to mean that those creature types can crew the vehicles no matter their power. For example, you can tap a creature with power 2 or greater to crew Roman Chariot, or you can tap any Soldier to crew it. Is there any better way to word those abilities?
"Battlelands" already don't make sense because unless the other 5 are printed in "Ravnica the Third: Battle for Jace's Head" or something, "battle" means impressively nothing.
Well the "Soldiers can crew Bananas" line does not seem to clearly state its intended effect. "Soldier can crew Bananas by itself" or maybe a better wording would help a lot in getting its intended effect across to players. Hopefully a more experienced worderer can help.
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MtG is where you can hate white players or black players, and still not be racist.
"Tap an untapped Soldier you control: Roman Chariot becomes an artifact creature until end of turn."
This. But to be honest... crew 2 seems like a little low a number. Your smallest Soldiers and Knights are maybe not able to crew those alone, but they are already so close that this additional line seems not enough of a benefit.
How about this:
Kinscaer Balloon
Artifact -- Vehicle (U)
Flying
Crew 2
Whenever ~ becomes crewed by one or more Kithkins, untap ~.
3/4
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Planar Chaos was not a mistake neither was it random. You might want to look at it again.
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Artifact -- Vehicle (U)
When Roman Chariot enters the battlefield, create a 1/1 white Soldier creature token.
Crew 2
Soldiers can crew Roman Chariot
4/5
Mechanical Horse 1W
Artifact -- Vehicle (C)
First strike
Crew 2
Knights can crew Mechanical Horse
3/2
The lines in bold are supposed to mean that those creature types can crew the vehicles no matter their power. For example, you can tap a creature with power 2 or greater to crew Roman Chariot, or you can tap any Soldier to crew it. Is there any better way to word those abilities?
Tangolands FTW!
"Tap an untapped Soldier you control: Roman Chariot becomes an artifact creature until end of turn."
This. But to be honest... crew 2 seems like a little low a number. Your smallest Soldiers and Knights are maybe not able to crew those alone, but they are already so close that this additional line seems not enough of a benefit.
How about this:
Kinscaer Balloon
Artifact -- Vehicle (U)
Flying
Crew 2
Whenever ~ becomes crewed by one or more Kithkins, untap ~.
3/4
Finally a good white villain quote: "So, do I ever re-evaluate my life choices? Never, because I know what I'm doing is a righteous cause."
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