MTG Salvation

I have none for your card at the moment.


Mytoplasm
Creature - Ooze Wierd (R)
Graft 1
Replicate U
0/0

Clone much? I can't think of too many instances where you'd want to put a token copy of a card into play rather than having a second card of it. Not much else to say.

Boush, Tinker 1RRUU
Legendary Creature - Goblin Rigger
Skip you next turn, T: Untap all permanents you control.
"You have ten seconds to comply."
2/3

Yes, it's unoriginal, so sue me.

Quote from Ixias

Fun with a Mirror Gallery and two copies in play.

you don't need mirror gallery. It untaps itself.

Queen of Nothingness 1B
Creature - Nightmare
Fear
As Queen of Nothingness comes into play, any player may discard a card at random and discard a card. If any player does, sacrifice Queen of Nothingness.
4/5

Should probably cost as much as Stupor. I do like the idea of a sorcery conditionally attached to a creature (different from evoke thankfully). So my next card will be something similar.

Flame-Kindling - R
Creature - Elemental
Flash, Haste, Shroud, Non-basic landwalk
When you play Flame-Kindling any player may pay 3 life. If a player does, counter Flame-Kindling
1/1

I LIKE flame kindling! Wow, for once raging goblin is good!

Donated Golem 0
Artifact Creature - Golem
Flash
When you play Donation Golem choose an opponent. Tap up to five lands target player controls.
When Donation Golem comes into play, the chosen opponent gains control of it.
2/2
There's no such thing as a free golem.

Flame-Kindling - Something tells me it's a very weird card to have a counter-ability on. I guess it's costed correctly...

Next:

Fast Forward 4UU
Instant
Spellmorph 5U (You may play this face down as a 2/2 creature for 3. You may play it for its spellmorph cost by turning it face up.)
Take an extra turn after this one.

EDIT: Sarnath'd. But I'm quite unsure about the Donated Golem, so I'll leave it to someone else.

Quote from Stairc

I LIKE flame kindling! Wow, for once raging goblin is good!

Donated Golem 0
Artifact Creature - Golem
Flash
When you play Donation Golem choose an opponent. Tap up to five lands target player controls.
When Donation Golem comes into play, the chosen opponent gains control of it.
2/2
There's no such thing as a free golem.

If you reword this as an instant this is what you get (and also how you evaluate it)

Donate golem - 0
Instant
Put a 2/2 colorless artifact creature Golem into play under target opponent's control. Tap up to five lands that player controls.

.... probably too powerful? I mean you get to tap them down for zero mana (although tapping three lands only costs a single blue)

I don't know if the trade off is that balanced but the effect might be terribly moot. It's hard to evaluate a card with an underused mechanic like tapping lands down.

........... No card?
Well here's a card that I made in another thread recently, I'm just not sure if it works.

Lupine Diplomat1UG
Creature - Wolf Advisor
When ~ comes into play, you may look at an opponents hand. If you do you may return target card in your graveyard to your hand if it shares a converted mana cost with a card in the opponents hand.
1/2

It combines the scavenger/hunter with the ambassador.

You may have to replace "target" with "a". Currently, you would have to choose the card before looking at the opponent's hand.

Point taken, but is there an exact way to look at the opponents hand before the choice?

Not related: Illuminations, I fixed the mana cost for the fill in the box.

When ~ comes into play, look at target opponent's hand. Then you may return a card that shares a converted mana cost with a card there from your graveyard to your hand.

It's Vanishing now. it replaced Fading so that they could just use Time counters for 2 mechanics.

It's pretty balanced. takes 5 turns to go off. only reason i see that it's legendary is to drop them back to back turn 2 and 3.

Invoking the Mana Prime WUBRG
Sorcery
Remove ~ from the game and put 10 charge counters on it.
Whenever you play a spell, remove a charge counter from ~ and add 1 mana of any color to your mana pool. Play this ability only if ~ is removed from the game.
When the last charge counter is removed from ~, return it to your hand.

ehh i wish i knew more about these sort of cards that can be removed from game and have counters on them....all ill say is, i dont get that what if you play a spell and you get that extra mana....but can't play anything, wouldnt you be burning yourself ?? if someone wants to critique my card and the previous one by all means go ahead so im a bit more informed


Treacherous Throat-cutter
2:SymBR::SymBR:
Creature-Goblin Assassin
When ~ comes into play put a -1/-1 counter on target creature
Creatures with -1/-1 counters on them can't block
Persist
3/3

It works, not completely broken. I'm not the best card criticizer person so if I missed anything, please correct me. Anyways, it has an interesting concept, it could work, but a 2/2 non-blocker? Not the best thing to bring back into play but again, it is playable.

Etherbound Cylian GW
Artifact Creature - Elf Druid
,T: Add or to your mana pool.
The temptation to infuse one’s self with etherium finally got to the so-called “pure” elves of the Sacellum.
2/2

Etherbound Cylian - I'd reduce the cost of the ability by :1mana:.

The artifact part doesn't make too much sense.

Raigor Stonehoof 2RRGG
Legendary Creature - Minotaur Warrior
2RG: Raigor Stonehoof gets +X/+0 until end of turn, where X is his power. This ability can only be played once each turn.
"Start running!"
5/4

This is actually probably a good deal underpowered, take a look at Chameleon Colossus which beats that seven ways from Monday. As it's currently printed, you could probably knock off 2 from the costs of both the creature itself, and it's ability.

Quitzatl the Unicarian - :symr::symg::symw::symu:
Legendary Creature - Dragon

Flying
When Quitzatl the Unicarian comes into play, search your library for any number of lands and remove them from the game.
:symu::symr:, return a permanent card that's removed from the game to play under your control: Quitzatl gets +2/+0 until end of turn.

4/4

Amazing effect, which I think is just too cheap for that cost. 7cc's probably good to go though.


X effect.

Valiant Formation XWW
Instant
Put X 1/1 white Soldier creature tokens into play. If you spend only W on Valiant Formation, those tokens get +1/+1 until end of turn.

So, mass blocker in Tron, and mass murderer in monowhite. Out of monowhite, consider it a mini Decree of Justice, minus the 'cantrip' (due to Cycling). What say you?

Snake Breeding -- It's more interesting if the 1/1 has deathtouch, and the 5/5 doesn't (why does it need it, anyway?) With the existing version, there's no reason not to target yourself with the 5/5 deathtouch, while your opponent gets a one-turn reprieve -- barring Unsummon or other tricks.

But it's even more interesting if it affects all your teammates, and all your opponent's teammates; and if it gives everyone the choice.

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Hide the Scrolls -- 3U
Sorcery
Remove target library from the game. At the end of turn, that library's owner chooses a card removed from the game this way, shuffles each other card removed from the game this way into his or her library, then puts the chosen card on top.

hurmm...i dont know if i would like to use this card since id hope i wouldnt have many cards that had a high mana cost considering it only costs 4 to play that...but it seems like interesting card

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Rykouken, the Hero of Time
Legendary Creature- Human Time-Traveler
Kicker-1R and/or 1W
When ~ comes into play if you paid the 1R kicker cost ~ gains haste. If you paid the 1W kicker cost ~ gains first strike
When ~ comes into play, at the end of your combat phase, untap all creatures you control and there is another combat phase.
"Now you see me. Now you see me again !"
5/5

I like the name to your card n00b. And the kicker idea is clever really flows nice with a Timespiral set.
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Just an idea for a fog card.
Morning Peace - 2:symuw::symuw:
Prevent all combat damage that would be dealt this turn. If U was payed each player draws two cards and discards two cards. If W was payed draw gain 1 life for each card drawn this turn.
The first aspect is to speed up the game and draw your fogs effects. The second is a nice gain life that scales well with the turbo effect run in mill.

Quote from Alabran

Quitzatl the Unicarian - :symr::symg::symw::symu:
Legendary Creature - Dragon

Flying
When Quitzatl the Unicarian comes into play, search your library for any number of lands and remove them from the game.
:symu::symr:, return a permanent card that's removed from the game to play under your control: Quitzatl gets +2/+0 until end of turn.

4/4

Ah! What the Nephilim SHOULD have been like! Powerful! The biggest problem I see is that it would be such an AWESOME Grixis recursion target. Black LOVES this card! With a cost like :symr::symg::symw::symu: it should be antiblack. If you had to cast this card (play it from your hand) it would be better. I also think it would be cooler if it had an activation cost that matched it's casting cost.

:symr::symg::symw::symu:, return a permanent card that's removed from the game to play under your control: ~ gains haste, first strike, flying, and gains +2/+0 until end of turn.

Returning a permanent to play that's been removed from the game is way too powerful to cost just :symu::symr:.

Really cool concept!

Quote from N00bsauce Guildmage

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Rykouken, the Hero of Time
Legendary Creature- Human Time-Traveler
Kicker-1R and/or 1W
When ~ comes into play if you paid the 1R kicker cost ~ gains haste. If you paid the 1W kicker cost ~ gains first strike
When ~ comes into play, at the end of your combat phase, untap all creatures you control and there is another combat phase.
"Now you see me. Now you see me again !"
5/5

I really like him but a 5/5 haste, first strike, 6RW is a little expensive.

Maybe if it was:

If RR was spent to play ~, ~ gains haste.
If WW was spent to play ~, ~ gains first strike.

I think a 5/5 haste creature for 4RR is fair.
I think a 5/5 first strike creature for 4WW is fair.
I think a 5/5 first strike, haste creature for 2WWRR is awesome!

Quote from Herooftime7888

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Just an idea for a fog card.
Morning Peace - 2:symuw::symuw:
Prevent all combat damage that would be dealt this turn. If U was payed each player draws two cards and discards two cards. If W was payed * gain 1 life for each card drawn this turn.
The first aspect is to speed up the game and draw your fogs effects. The second is a nice gain life that scales well with the turbo effect run in mill.

*took word "draw" out.

Not my type of card but then, I'm not a white/blue player at heart. This is one of those types of cards where, if played against me, I'd have to tell my opponent something uncomplimentary about his mother. So I think it's a really good card, if you're a white/blue control player. Fairly costed and the effects work well together. I think it could even be fair at 1:symuw::symuw:

***EDIT*** On second thought, I think it would be better to cast it at 1WU. White doesn't get card draw and blue doesn't get life gain but they would work nicely together in the way you're proposing.

My turn!

Fat Elf 2G
Creature - Elf Warrior
You may not cast ~ unless you've played another spell with a converted casting cost of 3 or greater this turn.
5/5

Okay, the name needs work. What else? I like it!! (of course I do, I designed it!)

Hmmm, seems like a nice concept. You may be able to more competitively price it though while weakening another area possibly. Something like:

Vengeful Elves GG
Creature-Elf Warrior (R)
Flash
You may only play Vengeful Elves as long as another spell with cmc 3 or greater has been played by an opponent this turn.
"Sometimes anger is the greatest motivator."
4/3

By making it Double Green, you are allowed to lower the cost a little, making him more viable. Also, to balance the powerful atk and defense for his cost, you make it so you can only play him in response to your opponent. This also adds a bit of flavor namewise.

Now for my own devious creation. Sorry if this wording is a little confuddledl. I couldnt think of any better way to put it. Also, can someone explain how to put mana symbols and the like into posts? I just joined today

Suicidal Psychomancer 1UBB
Creature - Human Sorcerer (R)
Shroud
Whenever you discard a card from your hand, you may pay half your life, rounded down. If you do, remove that card from the game suspended with 1 time counter on it.
"Psychomancers have reputations for living short lives. Of course, the same could be said of their enemies."
3/4

Any ideas?

Suicidal Psychomancer - You forgot that the card needs to gain suspend; you can't say "suspended with 1 time counter", it should probably be "remove it from the game with one time counter on it. If it doesn't have suspend, it gains suspend." See Jhoira of the Ghitu. On a side note, you're pretty good at flavor text.

Here's a card with bigger suspend shenanigans:

Raijin, Storm Spirit 3WU
Legendary Creature - Elemental
XWU: Remove ~ from the game with X time counters on it. It gains suspend.
As long as ~ is removed from the game and has a time counter on it, counter all spells and activated abilities played.
3/3

i like it. cost effective. of course Raijin is one of my favorite DotA characters as well.
the only thing that i might do is add, "Whenever a spell or activated ability is countered this way, remove a time counter from ~." you could remove the casting cost and make it to where the suspend cost must be 3 or more. that would give you more to add to the base creature.

Hidden Phylactery 1BB
Legendary Artifact
Flash
You're life total is 0.
1BBB: Hidden Phylactery is Indestructible until end of turn.