Lightforger :2mana::symw:
Creature - Human Mystic (?)
When ~ enters the battlefield, return an Equipment card from your graveyard to your hand.
:symw:, Sacrifice ~: You may put an Equipment card from your hand onto the battlefield.
2/2
Burial Priest
Creature - Kithkin Cleric (U)
:1mana::symw:: Exile target creature card from a graveyard. If you do, you gain 3 life. A blessed grave will give rest to both the dead and the living.
1/1
Blood Tax :3mana::symw:
Enchantment (U)
If a source would deal damage to you, prevent that damage unless its controller pays :1mana:. A silver coin will pay for a pricked finger or a slashed throat - but it will be paid.
Dustcloak Sliver :2mana::symw:
Creature - Sliver (C)
Flash
Any player may play Sliver cards as though they had flash.
Slivers have "When this permanent enters the battlefield, you may return a Sliver you control to its owner's hand."
2/2
Another [thread="261113"]old card of mine[/thread] that needs your fresh input now that she has been updated:
Brea, Sky's Armor :3mana::symw::symw:
Legendary Creature - Angel (R)
Flying
Other creatures you control have protection from noncreature.
4/5
I wouldn't mind a suggestion for Brea's flavor text either.
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Planar Chaos was not a mistake neither was it random. You might want to look at it again.
[thread=239793][Game] Level Up - Creature[/thread]
I get the mechanic of Blood Tax, but I think it needs a better name. "Blood Tax" makes it sound like "a tax you pay with blood," not "a tax you have to pay to spill blood."
Brea is kind of a bummer since it doesn't protect from sweepers and it makes it harder for white to use all those Auras and Equipment it likes so much.
Burial Priest
Creature - Kithkin Cleric (U)
:1mana::symw:: Exile target creature card from a graveyard. If you do, you gain 3 life. A blessed grave will give rest to both the dead and the living.
1/1
look at Deathrite Shaman
Make it: Burial Priest
Creature - Kithkin Cleric (U)
:1mana::symw:: Exile target creature card from a graveyard. You gain 3 life. A blessed grave will give rest to both the dead and the living.
1/1
Brea, Sky's Armor :3mana::symw::symw:
Legendary Creature - Angel (R)
Flying
Other creatures you control have protection from noncreature.
4/5
specify from what Brea gives protection from
like
Brea, Sky's Armor :3mana::symw::symw:
Legendary Creature - Angel (R)
Flying
Other creatures you control have protection from noncreature spells and permanents.
4/5
for the flavor text depends of her backgrond story. From her ability i would make a
"thats enough, planeswalker! Your's threachery had made too much fallens. No one will die now under my command.
-Brea, Sky's Armor"
"Lightforger" sounds more like it should be "forging" Auras from hand or library rather than Equipment from graveyard.
Lightforge Mystic 1W
Creature - Human Artificer
1/2
When Lightforge Mystic enters the battlefield, you may search your library for an Aura card, reveal it, put it into your hand, then shuffle your library. 1W, T: You may put an Aura card from your hand onto the battlefield.
"Lightforger" sounds more like it should be "forging" Auras from hand or library rather than Equipment from graveyard.
Lightforge Mystic 1W
Creature - Human Artificer
1/2
When Lightforge Mystic enters the battlefield, you may search your library for an Aura card, reveal it, put it into your hand, then shuffle your library. 1W, T: You may put an Aura card from your hand onto the battlefield.
Replacing Equipment with Aura doesn't make Stoneforge Mystic less OP.
Dahammer4
Artifact - Equipment (R)
Choose one - Equipped creature gets +4/+0; or Double Strike; or "When this creature deals combat damage to a creature, exile that creature"; or t, unattach ~ from this creature: ~ deals 5 damage to target creature." t: Equipped creature gains flying until end of turn.
Equip 3
look at Deathrite Shaman
Make it: Burial Priest
Creature - Kithkin Cleric (U)
:1mana::symw:: Exile target creature card from a graveyard. You gain 3 life. A blessed grave will give rest to both the dead and the living.
1/1
Why do you think it would be a better design if you could activate it multiple times for a single card?
specify from what Brea gives protection from
like
Brea, Sky's Armor :3mana::symw::symw:
Legendary Creature - Angel (R)
Flying
Other creatures you control have protection from noncreature spells and permanents.
4/5
Why do you think it would be a better design if you could activate it multiple times for a single card?
yeah, soo you activate 3 times. the first to resolve counter all others.is this broken or bad?
EDIT:
from deathrite shaman rules :
10/1/2012: If the target of any of Deathrite Shaman’s three abilities is an illegal target when that ability tries to resolve, it will be countered and none of its effects will happen. You won’t add mana to your mana pool, no opponent will lose life, or you won’t gain life, as appropriate.
yeah, soo you activate 3 times. the first to resolve counter all others.is this broken or bad?
I guess, we can improve upon Creakwood Ghoul with a little integrated reminder text. Is the hint a lost opportunity? Deathrite Shaman is unlikely to usually untap in time to activate again in response to its own activated ability. But other cards might be easier to process with that little "If you do" at no cost - or is there a cost I don't consider?
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Planar Chaos was not a mistake neither was it random. You might want to look at it again.
[thread=239793][Game] Level Up - Creature[/thread]
I guess, we can improve upon Creakwood Ghoul with a little integrated reminder text. Is the hint a lost opportunity? Deathrite Shaman is unlikely to usually untap in time to activate again in response to its own activated ability. But other cards might be easier to process with that little "If you do" at no cost - or is there a cost I don't consider?
i don't know if what you want is a specific ability that uses "If you do" in its costs or when this wording is used , soo lets go:
I think that aways a "If you do" is used it refers to a "you may" a opition that you may or may not do when resolving that ability.
so for that card a if you do ability could have been worded like: 1W: you may exile a card from target player's graveyard. if you do, gain 3 life.
Creature - Human Mystic (?)
When ~ enters the battlefield, return an Equipment card from your graveyard to your hand.
:symw:, Sacrifice ~: You may put an Equipment card from your hand onto the battlefield.
2/2
Creature - Kithkin Cleric (U)
:1mana::symw:: Exile target creature card from a graveyard. If you do, you gain 3 life.
A blessed grave will give rest to both the dead and the living.
1/1
Enchantment (U)
If a source would deal damage to you, prevent that damage unless its controller pays :1mana:.
A silver coin will pay for a pricked finger or a slashed throat - but it will be paid.
Creature - Sliver (C)
Flash
Any player may play Sliver cards as though they had flash.
Slivers have "When this permanent enters the battlefield, you may return a Sliver you control to its owner's hand."
2/2
Legendary Creature - Angel (R)
Flying
Other creatures you control have protection from noncreature.
4/5
Finally a good white villain quote: "So, do I ever re-evaluate my life choices? Never, because I know what I'm doing is a righteous cause."
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Remnants: Valheim
Legendary Journey: Heroes & Planeswalkers
Saga: Shards of Rabiah
Legends: The Elder Dragons
Read up on Red Flags & NWO
I get the mechanic of Blood Tax, but I think it needs a better name. "Blood Tax" makes it sound like "a tax you pay with blood," not "a tax you have to pay to spill blood."
Brea is kind of a bummer since it doesn't protect from sweepers and it makes it harder for white to use all those Auras and Equipment it likes so much.
look at Deathrite Shaman
Make it:
Burial Priest
Creature - Kithkin Cleric (U)
:1mana::symw:: Exile target creature card from a graveyard. You gain 3 life.
A blessed grave will give rest to both the dead and the living.
1/1
specify from what Brea gives protection from
like
Brea, Sky's Armor :3mana::symw::symw:
Legendary Creature - Angel (R)
Flying
Other creatures you control have protection from noncreature spells and permanents.
4/5
for the flavor text depends of her backgrond story. From her ability i would make a
"thats enough, planeswalker! Your's threachery had made too much fallens. No one will die now under my command.
-Brea, Sky's Armor"
Lightforge Mystic
1W
Creature - Human Artificer
1/2
When Lightforge Mystic enters the battlefield, you may search your library for an Aura card, reveal it, put it into your hand, then shuffle your library.
1W, T: You may put an Aura card from your hand onto the battlefield.
Replacing Equipment with Aura doesn't make Stoneforge Mystic less OP.
Sigpic by Rivenor
Artifact - Equipment (R)
Choose one - Equipped creature gets +4/+0; or Double Strike; or "When this creature deals combat damage to a creature, exile that creature"; or t, unattach ~ from this creature: ~ deals 5 damage to target creature."
t: Equipped creature gains flying until end of turn.
Equip 3
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[OMC] Omerium's Collapse
Why do you think it would be a better design if you could activate it multiple times for a single card?
I don't want to name emblems in rule text though.
Well, back to Avacyn then.
Finally a good white villain quote: "So, do I ever re-evaluate my life choices? Never, because I know what I'm doing is a righteous cause."
Factions: Sleeping
Remnants: Valheim
Legendary Journey: Heroes & Planeswalkers
Saga: Shards of Rabiah
Legends: The Elder Dragons
Read up on Red Flags & NWO
yeah, soo you activate 3 times. the first to resolve counter all others.is this broken or bad?
EDIT:
from deathrite shaman rules :
10/1/2012: If the target of any of Deathrite Shaman’s three abilities is an illegal target when that ability tries to resolve, it will be countered and none of its effects will happen. You won’t add mana to your mana pool, no opponent will lose life, or you won’t gain life, as appropriate.
I guess, we can improve upon Creakwood Ghoul with a little integrated reminder text. Is the hint a lost opportunity? Deathrite Shaman is unlikely to usually untap in time to activate again in response to its own activated ability. But other cards might be easier to process with that little "If you do" at no cost - or is there a cost I don't consider?
Finally a good white villain quote: "So, do I ever re-evaluate my life choices? Never, because I know what I'm doing is a righteous cause."
Factions: Sleeping
Remnants: Valheim
Legendary Journey: Heroes & Planeswalkers
Saga: Shards of Rabiah
Legends: The Elder Dragons
Read up on Red Flags & NWO
i don't know if what you want is a specific ability that uses "If you do" in its costs or when this wording is used , soo lets go:
I think that aways a "If you do" is used it refers to a "you may" a opition that you may or may not do when resolving that ability.
so for that card a if you do ability could have been worded like:
1W: you may exile a card from target player's graveyard. if you do, gain 3 life.