Coronis, Emperor of the Zenith 5WW
Legendary Creature - Angel (M)
Flying
Your opponents untap step is after their second main phase.
5/5
Arile Daenum WUU
Planeswalker - Arile (M)
+2: Each player returns a creature they control to its owners hand.
-2: Name a nonland card. Players can’t play the named card so long as Arile Daenum is in play
-7: Name a nonland card. Until the end of turn, the named card cost 0 to cast.
3
Sunlit Commander 1WW
Creature - Human Knight (R)
Vigilance, Solar (When you untap Sunlit Commander, you may tap target creature unless it’s controller pays 1.) T, Tap another untapped creature you control: Put onto the battlefield one creature with a converted mana cost 2 or less.
2/2
Void Eclipse 2BB
Sorcery (U)
Destroy target non black creature. Each player then puts the top X cards of their library into their graveyard, where X is the destroyed creatures power.
Forecast - Discard two cards: Destroy target non black creature.
Rangnor, Lich of the Waning Moon 2BBB
Legendary Creature - Zombie Wizard(M)
Intimidate, Lunar (When you tap Rangnor, Lich of the Waning Moon, target player put the top card of their library into their graveyard unless they pay 1.) TB, Discard a card: Put onto the battlefield two 1/1 black zombie tokens with lunar
4/3
Ser Coronii 4
Legendary Artifact (M) T4: Reveal your hand. Each player then sacrifices lands equal to the number of lands revealed this way. Repeat this for creatures, enchantments, and artifacts. Spend only mana of any one colour to activate this.
@Coronis: i somehow see this text fit better. "Each opponent skip their untap step. If he or she does, untap all permanent that player control at the beginning of his or her second main phase."
@Arile: isn't the ultimate somewhat weak for a 7 loyalty point ultimate? well, you have to have access to more than one copy of a spell (either in graveyard when you have Yawgmoth Bargain) or hands to make it worth it.
@Sunlit Commander: i somehow think we do not need to have the keyword "Solar", but i maybe wrong seems like it just take more space than just writing out what "Solar" does. Second ability is ok i guess
@Void: seems pretty cool could be a bomb in a limited, a pretty nice 0 mana creature removal
@Lich: I must say that so far all Lich creature are zombies in Magic. so it could just be a Zombie Wizard for that sense.. and most Liches, except Scornful Aether Lich cant be killed in a normal way.. or giving us an ability not being able to lose the game in a normal way.. they prolong our life or their own life one way or another.. so i must say, this Legendary Lich isn't really a Lich somehow.. As for the flavour of rising the dead, a Necromancer as a name could be a better choice. as for ability, it seems pretty okay
@Coronii: "Spend only mana of any one colour to activate Ser Coronii ability" i guess this would be the correct wording for it.. i refer to Imperiosaurand Black Lotus wording for it. Nice artifact
@Coronis: i somehow see this text fit better. "Each opponent skip their untap step. If he or she does, untap all permanent that player control at the beginning of his or her second main phase."
That's not quite the same ability, but I get what your going for. I would want a second opinion before I worded it that way.
@Arile: isn't the ultimate somewhat weak for a 7 loyalty point ultimate? well, you have to have access to more than one copy of a spell (either in graveyard when you have Yawgmoth Bargain) or hands to make it worth it.
Depending what spell you play, you may be right. Though If I say something like an Eldrazi it doesn't seem so weak, and since his ability is a plus 2, its not a long wait. Dunno.
@Sunlit Commander: i somehow think we do not need to have the keyword "Solar", but i maybe wrong seems like it just take more space than just writing out what "Solar" does. Second ability is ok i guess
Solar is a keyword as much for the set flavor as anything else, and beyond a base set could be used alone without reminder text.
@Void: seems pretty cool could be a bomb in a limited, a pretty nice 0 mana creature removal
Thanks
@Lich: I must say that so far all Lich creature are zombies in Magic. so it could just be a Zombie Wizard for that sense.. and most Liches, except Scornful Aether Lich cant be killed in a normal way.. or giving us an ability not being able to lose the game in a normal way.. they prolong our life or their own life one way or another.. so i must say, this Legendary Lich isn't really a Lich somehow.. As for the flavour of rising the dead, a Necromancer as a name could be a better choice. as for ability, it seems pretty okay
You're right about it needing to be a zombie wizard. However, his ability in term of set flavor, is not necrotic, so changing his name that way doesn't quite work. I may need to change something else to make him more Lich like in general though.
@Coronii: "Spend only mana of any one colour to activate Ser Coronii ability" i guess this would be the correct wording for it.. i refer to Imperiosaurand Black Lotus wording for it. Nice artifact
Council of the Rim 2UUU
Legendary Creature - Human Advisor (M)
You may look at any face down card and cards in hidden zones of your opponents (This includes their hand, library, and cards outside the game.) TXXU: Search your opponents library for X cards and exile them. Then that player shuffles his library. Put the cards exiled this way on the bottom of their library in any order.
3/4
Agreed with iphanx on the untap thing. There's no precedent for moving phases to a different part of the turn, and the two abilities are effectively very similar, if not the same in most cases.
The -2 might be a bit strong for its cost. I wouldnt put it at lower than -3. She shouldnt be able to alternate +2/-2 each turn, or the game will lock too quickly. I would also start her at 2 loyalty. The ultimate's wording needs to be changed as well, I think.
Agreed with iphanx on the untap thing. There's no precedent for moving phases to a different part of the turn, and the two abilities are effectively very similar, if not the same in most cases.
The -2 might be a bit strong for its cost. I wouldn't put it at lower than -3. She shouldn't be able to alternate +2/-2 each turn, or the game will lock too quickly. I would also start her at 2 loyalty. The ultimate's wording needs to be changed as well, I think.
I need to change that planeswalkers name apparently since everyone assumes it's a woman and not a man... balncing I will think about, though Ive already updated him to this thus far:
Arile Daenum 2WU
Planeswalker - Arile (M)
+2:Each player returns a creature they control to its owners hand.
-2:Name a nonland card. Players can’t play the named card so long as Arile Daenum is in play.
-7:Name a nonland card. You gain an emblem with “The named card cost 0 to cast"
3
Also, iphanx's ability is different since he places the untapping at the BEGINING of the second main phase when the way I first worded it would of been at the end of the second main phase. An easy fix, but that's what I meant about the ability not being the same.
Also:
he picture for counsil of the rim can be a bunch of business people in a circle using their black berry
Hilarious! Not particularly helpful, but hilarious.
Perhaps: "Your opponent skips the first Untap Step of each of their turns. At the beginning of enchanted player's second main phase each turn, that player gets an additional untap step after this step."
Something like that? Wording being cobbled from the cards that skip steps and Paradox Haze.
One of the Trench10UUU
Creature - Leviathan
Delve, Islandwalk
When CARDNAME enters the battlefield, put X flood counters into play on X target lands, where X is the number of blue cards exiled to cast this. Lands with flood counters are Islands.
7/7
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Legendary Creature - Angel (M)
Flying
Your opponents untap step is after their second main phase.
5/5
Arile Daenum WUU
Planeswalker - Arile (M)
+2: Each player returns a creature they control to its owners hand.
-2: Name a nonland card. Players can’t play the named card so long as Arile Daenum is in play
-7: Name a nonland card. Until the end of turn, the named card cost 0 to cast.
3
Creature - Human Knight (R)
Vigilance, Solar (When you untap Sunlit Commander, you may tap target creature unless it’s controller pays 1.)
T, Tap another untapped creature you control: Put onto the battlefield one creature with a converted mana cost 2 or less.
2/2
Void Eclipse 2BB
Sorcery (U)
Destroy target non black creature. Each player then puts the top X cards of their library into their graveyard, where X is the destroyed creatures power.
Forecast - Discard two cards: Destroy target non black creature.
Rangnor, Lich of the Waning Moon 2BBB
Legendary Creature - Zombie Wizard(M)
Intimidate, Lunar (When you tap Rangnor, Lich of the Waning Moon, target player put the top card of their library into their graveyard unless they pay 1.)
TB, Discard a card: Put onto the battlefield two 1/1 black zombie tokens with lunar
4/3
Ser Coronii 4
Legendary Artifact (M)
T4: Reveal your hand. Each player then sacrifices lands equal to the number of lands revealed this way. Repeat this for creatures, enchantments, and artifacts. Spend only mana of any one colour to activate this.
@Arile: isn't the ultimate somewhat weak for a 7 loyalty point ultimate? well, you have to have access to more than one copy of a spell (either in graveyard when you have Yawgmoth Bargain) or hands to make it worth it.
@Sunlit Commander: i somehow think we do not need to have the keyword "Solar", but i maybe wrong seems like it just take more space than just writing out what "Solar" does. Second ability is ok i guess
@Void: seems pretty cool could be a bomb in a limited, a pretty nice 0 mana creature removal
@Lich: I must say that so far all Lich creature are zombies in Magic. so it could just be a Zombie Wizard for that sense.. and most Liches, except Scornful Aether Lich cant be killed in a normal way.. or giving us an ability not being able to lose the game in a normal way.. they prolong our life or their own life one way or another.. so i must say, this Legendary Lich isn't really a Lich somehow.. As for the flavour of rising the dead, a Necromancer as a name could be a better choice. as for ability, it seems pretty okay
@Coronii: "Spend only mana of any one colour to activate Ser Coronii ability" i guess this would be the correct wording for it.. i refer to Imperiosaurand Black Lotus wording for it. Nice artifact
That's not quite the same ability, but I get what your going for. I would want a second opinion before I worded it that way.
Depending what spell you play, you may be right. Though If I say something like an Eldrazi it doesn't seem so weak, and since his ability is a plus 2, its not a long wait. Dunno.
Solar is a keyword as much for the set flavor as anything else, and beyond a base set could be used alone without reminder text.
Thanks
You're right about it needing to be a zombie wizard. However, his ability in term of set flavor, is not necrotic, so changing his name that way doesn't quite work. I may need to change something else to make him more Lich like in general though.
Your wording is better. Fixing.
Council of the Rim 2UUU
Legendary Creature - Human Advisor (M)
You may look at any face down card and cards in hidden zones of your opponents (This includes their hand, library, and cards outside the game.)
TXXU: Search your opponents library for X cards and exile them. Then that player shuffles his library. Put the cards exiled this way on the bottom of their library in any order.
3/4
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The -2 might be a bit strong for its cost. I wouldnt put it at lower than -3. She shouldnt be able to alternate +2/-2 each turn, or the game will lock too quickly. I would also start her at 2 loyalty. The ultimate's wording needs to be changed as well, I think.
I need to change that planeswalkers name apparently since everyone assumes it's a woman and not a man... balncing I will think about, though Ive already updated him to this thus far:
Arile Daenum 2WU
Planeswalker - Arile (M)
+2:Each player returns a creature they control to its owners hand.
-2:Name a nonland card. Players can’t play the named card so long as Arile Daenum is in play.
-7:Name a nonland card. You gain an emblem with “The named card cost 0 to cast"
3
Also, iphanx's ability is different since he places the untapping at the BEGINING of the second main phase when the way I first worded it would of been at the end of the second main phase. An easy fix, but that's what I meant about the ability not being the same.
Also:
Hilarious! Not particularly helpful, but hilarious.
Something like that? Wording being cobbled from the cards that skip steps and Paradox Haze.
Just for the heck of it :>
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LOL! Though you did change the cards abilities somewhat. Trying to tell me something?
its your card so i dont care if you change it or not
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One of the Trench10UUU
Creature - Leviathan
Delve, Islandwalk
When CARDNAME enters the battlefield, put X flood counters into play on X target lands, where X is the number of blue cards exiled to cast this. Lands with flood counters are Islands.
7/7