This Set has two sides Utopia GWU and chaos RBU. Okran channeled BR mana to one side and GW mana to the other, then split the U mana in between the two sides the split the plane in two. 200 years later he put it back together to see what would happen. In these 200 years of separation each side evovled differently. Utopia has Rocs, Loxodons, Elves and Jhovalls. Chaos has Dragons, Cyclops, Humans and Hell Hounds. Tyrul BUW creatures are sphinxes, vedalken, flying mantas, spirits, zombies, merfolk, leviathans. The Okranee BR. These are made up of Okranics (Okran's expirements) vampires and zombies.
Creatures and Artifacts
Turein, Gluttonous Gorger (B/R)(B/R)UU Legendary Creature-Human Scholar Everytime a creature dies or takes damage, scry X where X is the creature's converted mana cost.
2R: deal 4 damage to target creature
2B: destroy target creature
4/2
Zitri, Defender of Utopia (G/W)(G/W)UU
Legendary Creatur-Elf Scholar
Defender
Everytime a player defends all defending creatures get +0/+2 during that combat, then you scry X where X is the total converted mana cost of the defenders.
2/4
Okran, Chaotic Expirementer RRRBBBU
Planeswalker- Okran Kaos
+0 For each permanent type Okran gains 1 loyalty
-0 Destroy a permanent with converted mana cost equal to or less than Okran's loyalty
-X kill X creatures or draw X cards where X is the amount of loyalty spent
1
Turein's Hell pup, Terry (B/R)(B/R)(B/R)
Legendary Creature-Hell hound pet
If you control Turein, Gluttonous Gorger Terry gains +2/+0 and intimidate
2/3
Zitri's Mount, Zoell(G/W)(G/W)(G/W)
Legendary Creature-Jhovall Mount
Mounted 2 (you may pair this creature with another and that creature gains +0/+2)
If you control Zitri, Defender of Utopia Zoella gains +0/+2 and vigilance
2/3
Claws of the Hellhound 2(B/R)(B/R)
Legendary Artifact-Equipment
Equip 2R
Equipped creature gains +2/+0
Armour of the Mount 2(G/W)(G/W)
Legendary Artifact-Equipment
Equip 2W
Equipped creature gets +0/+2
Okran's Notes 3
Legendary Artifact
At the begining of your upkeep draw X cards where X is the number of creature types there is on the feild
Feral Hell Hound (B/R)(B/R)
Creature-Hell Hound Mount
Mounted 1 (you may pair this creature with another and that creature gets +1/+0)
2R: +2/+0
2/3
Elven Mount(G/W)(G/W)
Creature-Jhovall Mount
Mounted 1 (you may pair this creature with another and that creature gets +0/+1)
2W: +0/+2
2/3
Outstanding Artificer (U/R)(U/R)(U/R)(U/R)
Creature-Cyclops Artificer
At the beginning of every Upkeep,Draw step, and main steps you may pay 2U to search you deck for any artifact and put it in your hand
3/3
Warcheif of Chaos (B/R)(B/R)(B/R)(B/R)(B/R)(B/R)
Creature-Cyclops Warrior
All red and black creatures get +2/+0
4/4
Utopian Weaponsmith (W/U)(W/U)(W/U)(W/U)
Creature-Loxodon Artificer
At the beginning of all combat, main and end steps you may pay 2U and search your deck for an artifact and put it in your hand
3/3
Warcheif of Utopia (G/W)(G/W)(G/W)(G/W)(G/W)(G/W)
Creature-Loxodon Warrior
All green and white creatures get +0/+2
4/4
Sky Mount of Chaos 2RR
Creature-Dragon Mount
Mounted 3 (you may pair this creature with another and that creature gets +2/+0)
4/4
Sky Mount of Utopia 2WW
Creature-Roc Mount
Mounted 3 (you may pair this creature with another and that creature gets +0/+2)
4/4
All knowing WWUUBB
Legendary crearure-Sphinx Scholar
Flying,vigilance
During your upkeep you may gain 2 life or do 2 damage to target permanent or player scry. 10 if you do 2 damage to target permanent or player or gain 2 life
2/2
Blue Artificer UUU
Creature-vedalken artificer
Fabricate 5
1/2
Sky ray WWWWUU
Creature-Manta ray mount
Flying, mounted 3(you may pair this creature with another)
If this creature is mounted gain 3 life every turn
3/4
All knowing's crown 10
Legendary Artifact-Equipment
Equip 2B 2W
Equipped creature can't untap
You may gain X life or damage another player Y or permanent with Z or less converted mana cost X equals equipped creatures power, Y equals equipped creatures toughness and Z equals the equipped creatures converted mana cost.
Eternal Guard of scrolls (W/U)(W/U)(W/U)
Creature-Spirit Knight
Every turn during you draw step scry. 1 before you draw if you draw the scryed card scry. 1 again
2/2
Mount of the high seas UUUUUBB
Creature-Leviathan mount
Mounted 5 (you may pair this creature with another)
If this creature is mounted every turn it destroys a vehicle (creature
State or artifact) and it's crew with 5 or less converted mana cost
4/4
Knowledge seeker UU
Creature-merfolk Scholar
Scry 1 every upkeep and draw a card every end step
1/1
All knowing's guard BBB
Creature-Zombie Knight
2/4
Sure. I saw you on other sets like Dorado I think. Thanks I really like mounted too. I won't be able to add anything till 3:00 because I will be at school 8:00
Don't take this the wrong way, but it's extremely hard to give advice if I can't understand your card formatting.
I don't even know how mounted works - is it an ETB trigger? Why is the reminder text different between different cards? Why is it sometimes a power boost and sometimes a toughness boost? Heck, I can't even understand some of your mana costs.
I suggest you read this to learn how to use mana tags, and if your cards are readable, then people can give you design critiques.
The reason why it is either a power or toughness boost is what shard the creature is Chaos loves power and Utopia loves toughness and I would love it you guys could help with th rarity of the cards and mana costs if you guys do not like. Thanks.
I've decided to go into more detail of the groups philosophies so you understand weird stuff I'm doing with the cards. Chaos the first group is and favor power buffs and damage being done. Utopia/Utopians are and like toughness buffs and defenders. Tyrul are and like life gain and damaging stuff. The Okranics like to mess with permanents in various ways. Now with the mounted mechanic it varies based on the group the creature is allied with.
Turein, Gluttonous Gorger (B/R)(B/R)UU Legendary Creature-Human Scholar Everytime a creature dies or takes damage, scry X where X is the creature's converted mana cost.
2R: deal 4 damage to target creature
2B: destroy target creature
4/2
Zitri, Defender of Utopia (G/W)(G/W)UU
Legendary Creatur-Elf Scholar
Defender
Everytime a player defends all defending creatures get +0/+2 during that combat, then you scry X where X is the total converted mana cost of the defenders.
2/4
Okran, Chaotic Expirementer RRRBBBU
Planeswalker- Okran Kaos
+0 For each permanent type Okran gains 1 loyalty
-0 Destroy a permanent with converted mana cost equal to or less than Okran's loyalty
-X kill X creatures or draw X cards where X is the amount of loyalty spent
1
Turein's Hell pup, Terry (B/R)(B/R)(B/R)
Legendary Creature-Hell hound pet
If you control Turein, Gluttonous Gorger Terry gains +2/+0 and intimidate
2/3
Zitri's Mount, Zoell(G/W)(G/W)(G/W)
Legendary Creature-Jhovall Mount
Mounted 2 (you may pair this creature with another and that creature gains +0/+2)
If you control Zitri, Defender of Utopia Zoella gains +0/+2 and vigilance
2/3
Claws of the Hellhound 2(B/R)(B/R)
Legendary Artifact-Equipment
Equip 2R
Equipped creature gains +2/+0
Armour of the Mount
2(G/W)(G/W)
Legendary Artifact-Equipment
Equip 2W
Equipped creature gets +0/+2
Okran's Notes 3
Legendary Artifact
At the begining of your upkeep draw X cards where X is the number of creature types there is on the feild
Feral Hell Hound (B/R)(B/R)
Creature-Hell Hound Mount
Mounted 1 (you may pair this creature with another and that creature gets +1/+0)
2R: +2/+0
2/3
Elven Mount(G/W)(G/W)
Creature-Jhovall Mount
Mounted 1 (you may pair this creature with another and that creature gets +0/+1)
2W: +0/+2
2/3
Outstanding Artificer (U/R)(U/R)(U/R)(U/R)
Creature-Cyclops Artificer
At the beginning of every Upkeep,Draw step, and main steps you may pay 2U to search you deck for any artifact and put it in your hand
3/3
Warcheif of Chaos (B/R)(B/R)(B/R)(B/R)(B/R)(B/R)
Creature-Cyclops Warrior
All red and black creatures get +2/+0
4/4
Utopian Weaponsmith
(W/U)(W/U)(W/U)(W/U)
Creature-Loxodon Artificer
At the beginning of all combat, main and end steps you may pay 2U and search your deck for an artifact and put it in your hand
3/3
Warcheif of Utopia
(G/W)(G/W)(G/W)(G/W)(G/W)(G/W)
Creature-Loxodon Warrior
All green and white creatures get +0/+2
4/4
Sky Mount of Chaos 2RR
Creature-Dragon Mount
Mounted 3 (you may pair this creature with another and that creature gets +2/+0)
4/4
Sky Mount of Utopia 2WW
Creature-Roc Mount
Mounted 3 (you may pair this creature with another and that creature gets +0/+2)
4/4
All knowing WWUUBB
Legendary crearure-Sphinx Scholar
Flying,vigilance
During your upkeep you may gain 2 life or do 2 damage to target permanent or player scry. 10 if you do 2 damage to target permanent or player or gain 2 life
2/2
Blue Artificer UUU
Creature-vedalken artificer
Fabricate 5
1/2
Sky ray WWWWUU
Creature-Manta ray mount
Flying, mounted 3(you may pair this creature with another)
If this creature is mounted gain 3 life every turn
3/4
All knowing's crown 10
Legendary Artifact-Equipment
Equip 2B 2W
Equipped creature can't untap
You may gain X life or damage another player Y or permanent with Z or less converted mana cost X equals equipped creatures power, Y equals equipped creatures toughness and Z equals the equipped creatures converted mana cost.
Eternal Guard of scrolls
(W/U)(W/U)(W/U)
Creature-Spirit Knight
Every turn during you draw step scry. 1 before you draw if you draw the scryed card scry. 1 again
2/2
Mount of the high seas UUUUUBB
Creature-Leviathan mount
Mounted 5 (you may pair this creature with another)
If this creature is mounted every turn it destroys a vehicle (creature
State or artifact) and it's crew with 5 or less converted mana cost
4/4
Knowledge seeker UU
Creature-merfolk Scholar
Scry 1 every upkeep and draw a card every end step
1/1
All knowing's guard BBB
Creature-Zombie Knight
2/4
Failed expirement(B/R)(B/R)
Creature-Okranic
Teramorph 1
"Oops. Try 33 fail"-Okran
2/3
Thrill seeker RRB
Creature-Vampire Warrior
Haste
2/3
Okran's servant BB
Creature-Zombie servant
Every turn if you control Okran,Chaotic Expirementer Okran's servant gets +1/+1
1/2
The first creation CCC
Legendary creture-Okranic
Teramorph 3
"He is my first creation, I love him the most"-Okran
2/3
Mind putting some line spaces between cards?
I don't even know how mounted works - is it an ETB trigger? Why is the reminder text different between different cards? Why is it sometimes a power boost and sometimes a toughness boost? Heck, I can't even understand some of your mana costs.
I suggest you read this to learn how to use mana tags, and if your cards are readable, then people can give you design critiques.
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