This thread will have two blocks.One 5,000 years before the mending and the other 5,000 years after the mending. These two blocks bring back slivers, phyrexians and Myr. These two blocks have 6 beast factions, four colored goblins (I don't know why), 10 sliver hives, and two planes at war.
The first set of the first block is called polemosi (war). Two sliver hives get introduced. Four beast factions get introduced. The invader factions are introduced and blue white goblins come out to play.
In this set I will be only using two sliver hives. The first hive is Bbypki. This hive is bant. Now onto the cards.
Bbypki, hive queen 2UWG Legendary creature- sliver
Exalted
All slivers you control get exalted
Tap: search your deck for a sliver card and put it into play tapped
5/5
Infectious sliver B
Creature- sliver
Infect
All slivers you control gain infect
1/2
Homicidal sliver 1B
Creature- sliver
Tap: kill target creature
All slivers you control gain this ability
2/3
Weakness sliver 1BB
Creature- sliver
Tap: target creature gains two -1/-1 counters
All slivers you control gain this ability
3/4
Mill sliver U
Creature- sliver
Tap: target player discards the top X cards of their library where X is all the slivers you control
1/2
Teramorphic sliver 1U
Creature- sliver
Tap: change target land's type
All slivers you control gain this ability
2/3
Biomorphic sliver 1UU
Creature- sliver
Tap: change target creature's type
All slivers you control gain this ability
3/4
Shrouded sliver G
Creature- sliver
Shroud
All slivers you control gain shroud
All slivers you control gain shroud
1/2
Unhexable sliver G
Creature- sliver
Hexproof
All slivers you control gain hexproof
2/3
Hulking sliver 1GG
Creature- sliver
Tap: Give target creature two +1/+1 counters
All slivers you control gain this ability
3/4
The next hive is Abryedi. This hive is abzan.
Abryedi, hive queen 2GBW
Legendary creature- sliver
Bolster 5
All slivers you control get bolster 3 and "Tap: Bolster 4"
Tap: search your library for a sliver card and put it on the battlefield tapped
5/5
Vigilant sliver W
Creature- sliver
Vigilance
All slivers you control get vigilance
1/2
ZOI sliver 1W
Creature- sliver
Whenever a sliver enters the battlefield under your control gain two life
2/3
Shielding sliver 1WW
Creature- sliver
Tap: neglect the next three damage done to you
All slivers you control gain this ability
3/4
ZOI linked sliver B
Creature- sliver
Lifelink
All slivers you control gain lifelink
1/2
ZOI gainer sliver 1B
Creature- sliver
Tap: gain two life
All slivers you control gain this ability
2/3
Destroyer sliver 1BB
Creature- sliver BB: destroy target permanent
All slivers you control gain this ability
3/4
Tera searcher sliver G
Creature- sliver
Discard a card: search your deck for a land and put it into play
All slivers you control gain "landfall: when a land comes onto play you may draw a card"
1/2
Mana sliver 1G
Creature- sliver
When you cast a creature spell with three or more converted mana cost create one of any color mana of your choice
2/3
Grinder sliver 1GG
Creature- sliver G: destroy X artifacts, where X is the number of slivers you control
3/4
Now for the beast factions. In this set there are four of the six beast factions. The first faction is Gata.
Leo, Gata king2(G/W)(G/W)
Legendary creature- Leonin warrior
Heroic, ferocious: When this creature enters the battlefield,if you control a creature with power four or more bolster four "If I'm to defend my plane I must unite all six, but how will I do that"-Leo
5/5
Gata rider1(G/W)
Creature- Kithkin warrior
Heroic
If you control a jhovall card this creature gains +1/+1 and vigilance "Leo is a noble king anyone would follow, but why is he so worried his plan will fail"-Gata citizen
2/3
Wildbrush stalkerGG
Creature- Jhovall
Skulk, Ferocious: When this creature enters the battlefield, if you control a creature with power four or greater kill target creature "These mounts will work for the task given to us from Leo and Mytree"-Gata mount rider
3/3
Wildbrush SabertoothGGG
Creature- Cat beast
Ferocious: When this creature enters the battlefield, if you control a creature with power four or greater create a green 3/4 Sabertooth token creature "Riding these mounts beat having to march any day"Leonin warrior
4/5
Gata guard1(G/W)
Creature- Leonin warrior
Heroic G: create a green 3/4 Sabertooth token creature "We face a new danger one that we have never seen before, their appearance is alien to this world"-Gata guard
3/5
This faction is Fidi. The mechanics are morbid and regenerate.
Nyu, Fidi queen 2(B/G)(B/G)(B/G)
Legendary creature- Naga warrior
Morbid: if a creature died last turn cast this card create a green black 2/3 Unstable experiment with vanishing X where X is the number of creatures that died last turn B: regenerate target creature "I can not wait to expirement on this so called "Alien threat"-Nyu
4/3
Lernaen Hydra 4GGGG
Legendary creature- Hydra
When this creature takes damage, unless the attacker pays1 for each damage done this creature gains two toughness for each mana not spent "Leo do not stress. Calm, down my beast and it's brood will deal with the threat"-Nyu to Leo
8/8
Shadow marsh hydra2(B/G)(B/G)
Creature- Hydra
When this creature is dealt damage the attacker may pay 1 for each damage being done. This creature gains two toughness for each mana not payed "See my beast has plenty of brood"-Nyu to Leo
4/4
Shadow marsh archer(B/G)(B/G)
Creature- Naga warrior
Morbid: if a creature died last turn kill target creature with flying "Do not worry Leo I can hit any target, no matter their speed, distance or size"-Archer to Leo
2/3
Nyu's expirementBG
Creature- chimera beast
At they beginning of your upkeep regenerate all creatures you control "Leo this will be our saving grace, he is built for this"-Nyu to Leo
2/2
Fidi Assassin (B/G)(B/G)(B/G)
Creature- Gorgon warrior B: destroy target creature "Nyu are you sure these can take on the invaders most of them are made of a shiny substance, not flesh"-Leo to Nyu
3/3
Unstable expirement Green Black
Token creature- Chimera beast
Vanishing X
2/3
This faction is Fovotan. Their mechanics are Flying and intimidate with a splash of vigilance.
Notuka, Fovotan queen 2(B/R)(B/R)(B/R)
Legendary creature- Dragokin warrior
Intimidate, flying "Why are you worried Leo". "Because we are facing a new threat, unlike the goblins of old".
6/6
Granitecliffs Sentinel 1RB
Creature- dragon
Flying, vigilance "My dragons should be able to melt this so called "shiny substance". "Good, then we can make use of the substance as well"-Nyu to Leo.
4/4
Granitecliffs shredder 2(B/R)
Creature- Manticore
Flying, intimidate "Look at this magnificent beast" "Bet you she can take more shiny Walker's than you can" " Well you got yourself a bet"- Leo to Notuka
2/3
Fovotan Sky knight1RR
Creature- Dragokin warrior
Flying, intimidate "Leo we trained them to intimidate their foes"
3/3
Now for the final beast faction(in this set there are two more) Dichila. Their mechanics are dash and battalion.
Mytree, Dichila queen2(R/G)(R/G)
Legendary creature- Satyr queen
Dash (R/G)(R/G)(You may cast this spell for its dash cost. If you do, it gains haste, and it's returned from the battlefeild to its owner's hand at the beginning of their next end step) Battalion (if this creature and at least two others attack, all creatures you control gain trample) "When do you think they will stop besieging our world Triso" " When we fight back and show them we will not give in to their planar invasion"-Mytree to Triso
4/5
Dichila sharpshooter (R/G)(R/G)
Creature- Satyr warrior
Tap: destroy target artifact or deal 1 damage to target creature. "You two must be strategic about where you put my squadron"Dichila squad leader to Mytree and Leo
1/2
Dichila cavalry 1(R/G)
Creature- Centaur warrior
Dash (you may cast this spell for its dash, if you do this creature gains haste, and it's returned to its owner's from the battlefeild the end of beggining of their next end step) "Leo where should we place cavalry" "I believe they would be good on the sides so we get the invaders on three sides not just one"
3/3
Dichila ravager (R/G)(R/G)(R/G)
Creature- Minotaur brute
Dash GR ( youay cast this spell for its dash cost, if you do this creature gains haste, and it's returned to its owner's hand at the beggining of their next upkeep)
4/4
What do you want the identity of this set to be? As is, just looking over, it feels like a handful of popular creature types stapled together, which makes for an uninteresting and unengaging setting. What mood should the audience get? What are players supposed to feel?
Like, take Lorado, which's one of the more popular custom sets. It's a spaghetti western setting, but also thematically goes for the idea of a low-key setting, less focus on magic and monsters and huge, world-changing conflict. It uses renown to carry a theme of 'carving out a name for yourself on the frontier.'
Alternatively, the Kaladesh, which carries overarching themes and moods dealing with wonder and invention and creation.
Your factions also seem very unbalanced. You don't want to mix three-color and two-color and four-color like this, mainly because no one's going to play two color if 3+ color is supported.
I do like the idea of confining a sliver archetype to three colors. But having multiple sliver factions across all five colors means people won't ever stick to the defined factions, and just go for slivers in as many colors as they can get.
OK so not have as many sliver hives? I really do not know what theme I am trying to express her to the players. The major conflict is that Teras Vasileo is being besieged. I have not completed the set yet but I do plan to.
Now onto the next major group, the invaders. This invader faction is the Polemistis (warriors)
Klaus, Vampire general (R/W)(W/B)(W/B)(B/R)(B/R)(B/R)
Legendary creature- Vampire soldier
Haste, raid (when this creature enters the battlefield if you attacked with a creature this turn, kill all creatures with power three or lower), flying
If this creature attacks with one or more creatures all creatures you control gain +2/+0
5/5
Vampire sniper (B/R)(B/R)
Creature- Vampire soldier
Flying, raid ( when this creature enters the battlefield if you attacked with a creature this turn kill target creature)
2/3
Speedy soldier (R/W)(R/W)
Creature- human gunman
Haste, reach
If you cast a creature with haste destroy target permanent
2/3
One eyed Marauder 2RRR
Creature- Cyclops warrior
Raid (when this creature enters the battlefeild, if you attacked this turn all creatures you control and +3/+3
6/6
Colossal swordsman 2RRR
Creature- Giant warrior
Raid (when this creature enters the battlefeild, if you attacked this turn deal five damage to target creature or player)
5/5
Now for the next invader faction, Technitis. Sorry there is only one card.
Notora, Elven Artificer 2GG
Legendary artifact creature- Elf
Affinity for artifacts (this spell costs 1 less for each artifact you control), Fabricate 5 (when this creature enters the battlefeild you may create five 1/1 colorless servo artifact creature tokens or put five +1/+1 counters on this creature)
3/3
Now for the last invader faction, the antikeimena (artifacts).
Myr Tyak, myr overseer 2(G/U)(G/U)(G/U)
Legendary artifact creature- Myr
Affinity for artifacts
When this creature enters the battlefeild untap all permanents you control
2/2
Golem Scyo, golem overseer X(U/R)(U/R)(U/R)
Affinity for artifacts
When this card comes into play search your deck for X artifacts where X is the number of mana payed for X
4/4
Sovra, decimator of worlds 11
Legendary artifact creature- Steel Titan
Annihilator 10, affinity for artifacts
11/11
Shotu and Nyta UUWW(W/U)
Legendary creature- goblin siblings
Fabricate 4
Tap (G/U): sacrifice a servo, create a 2/3 Aithir stoichaeaki artifact creature token with "when this creature enters the battlefeild create two E (energy counters)"
2/3
Ford, the first Aithir Stoichaeaki(2/G)(2/G)
Legendary artifact creature- Elemental EE: create two 1/1 blue thopters with crew 1
3/3
Green
A.S creation 1G
Instant
Create two 2/3 green Author stoichaeaki artifact creature tokens with "when this creature enters the battlefield create two E (energy counters)"
Flee 2G
Instant
No damage can be taken from combat this turn
Multicolor
Wild charge 1(R/G)
Instant
Destroy all creatures in combat
Aerial strike (R/W)(R/W)
Sorcery
All deal two damage to all creatures without flying
Colorless
Swarm X
Sorcery
Create X 1/1 colorless sliver creature tokens where X is the number of mana spent to cast this spell
White
Surprise (1/W)
Instant
Kill all attacking creatures
Red
Laser volley RRR
Instant
Deal two damage to each creature you do not control
Blue
Report U
Instant
Show a card from your hand, scry X where X is the converted mana cost of the revealed card
Enlightenment 1U
Sorcery
Scry. X where X is the number of Ustinae you control
This next set Anodos Kai Ptosi (rise and fall), will have The Psari (fish) and and Pouli (bird) beast factions, More Technitis, I will add more G.U (goblin union) in the other three colors. I will try to make their be a theme unlike the last one Wich was basically just militaristic factions.
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Bbypki, hive queen 2UWG Legendary creature- sliver
Exalted
All slivers you control get exalted
Tap: search your deck for a sliver card and put it into play tapped
5/5
Infectious sliver B
Creature- sliver
Infect
All slivers you control gain infect
1/2
Homicidal sliver 1B
Creature- sliver
Tap: kill target creature
All slivers you control gain this ability
2/3
Weakness sliver 1BB
Creature- sliver
Tap: target creature gains two -1/-1 counters
All slivers you control gain this ability
3/4
Mill sliver U
Creature- sliver
Tap: target player discards the top X cards of their library where X is all the slivers you control
1/2
Teramorphic sliver 1U
Creature- sliver
Tap: change target land's type
All slivers you control gain this ability
2/3
Biomorphic sliver 1UU
Creature- sliver
Tap: change target creature's type
All slivers you control gain this ability
3/4
Shrouded sliver G
Creature- sliver
Shroud
All slivers you control gain shroud
All slivers you control gain shroud
1/2
Unhexable sliver G
Creature- sliver
Hexproof
All slivers you control gain hexproof
2/3
Hulking sliver 1GG
Creature- sliver
Tap: Give target creature two +1/+1 counters
All slivers you control gain this ability
3/4
The next hive is Abryedi. This hive is abzan.
Abryedi, hive queen 2GBW
Legendary creature- sliver
Bolster 5
All slivers you control get bolster 3 and "Tap: Bolster 4"
Tap: search your library for a sliver card and put it on the battlefield tapped
5/5
Vigilant sliver W
Creature- sliver
Vigilance
All slivers you control get vigilance
1/2
ZOI sliver 1W
Creature- sliver
Whenever a sliver enters the battlefield under your control gain two life
2/3
Shielding sliver 1WW
Creature- sliver
Tap: neglect the next three damage done to you
All slivers you control gain this ability
3/4
ZOI linked sliver B
Creature- sliver
Lifelink
All slivers you control gain lifelink
1/2
ZOI gainer sliver 1B
Creature- sliver
Tap: gain two life
All slivers you control gain this ability
2/3
Destroyer sliver 1BB
Creature- sliver
BB: destroy target permanent
All slivers you control gain this ability
3/4
Tera searcher sliver G
Creature- sliver
Discard a card: search your deck for a land and put it into play
All slivers you control gain "landfall: when a land comes onto play you may draw a card"
1/2
Mana sliver 1G
Creature- sliver
When you cast a creature spell with three or more converted mana cost create one of any color mana of your choice
2/3
Grinder sliver 1GG
Creature- sliver
G: destroy X artifacts, where X is the number of slivers you control
3/4
Leo, Gata king2(G/W)(G/W)
Legendary creature- Leonin warrior
Heroic, ferocious: When this creature enters the battlefield,if you control a creature with power four or more bolster four
"If I'm to defend my plane I must unite all six, but how will I do that"-Leo
5/5
Gata rider1(G/W)
Creature- Kithkin warrior
Heroic
If you control a jhovall card this creature gains +1/+1 and vigilance
"Leo is a noble king anyone would follow, but why is he so worried his plan will fail"-Gata citizen
2/3
Wildbrush stalkerGG
Creature- Jhovall
Skulk, Ferocious: When this creature enters the battlefield, if you control a creature with power four or greater kill target creature
"These mounts will work for the task given to us from Leo and Mytree"-Gata mount rider
3/3
Wildbrush SabertoothGGG
Creature- Cat beast
Ferocious: When this creature enters the battlefield, if you control a creature with power four or greater create a green 3/4 Sabertooth token creature
"Riding these mounts beat having to march any day"Leonin warrior
4/5
Gata guard1(G/W)
Creature- Leonin warrior
Heroic
G: create a green 3/4 Sabertooth token creature
"We face a new danger one that we have never seen before, their appearance is alien to this world"-Gata guard
3/5
Sabertooth (Green)
Token creature- cat beast
3/4
Nyu, Fidi queen 2(B/G)(B/G)(B/G)
Legendary creature- Naga warrior
Morbid: if a creature died last turn cast this card create a green black 2/3 Unstable experiment with vanishing X where X is the number of creatures that died last turn
B: regenerate target creature
"I can not wait to expirement on this so called "Alien threat"-Nyu
4/3
Lernaen Hydra 4GGGG
Legendary creature- Hydra
When this creature takes damage, unless the attacker pays1 for each damage done this creature gains two toughness for each mana not spent
"Leo do not stress. Calm, down my beast and it's brood will deal with the threat"-Nyu to Leo
8/8
Shadow marsh hydra2(B/G)(B/G)
Creature- Hydra
When this creature is dealt damage the attacker may pay 1 for each damage being done. This creature gains two toughness for each mana not payed
"See my beast has plenty of brood"-Nyu to Leo
4/4
Shadow marsh archer(B/G)(B/G)
Creature- Naga warrior
Morbid: if a creature died last turn kill target creature with flying
"Do not worry Leo I can hit any target, no matter their speed, distance or size"-Archer to Leo
2/3
Nyu's expirementBG
Creature- chimera beast
At they beginning of your upkeep regenerate all creatures you control
"Leo this will be our saving grace, he is built for this"-Nyu to Leo
2/2
Fidi Assassin (B/G)(B/G)(B/G)
Creature- Gorgon warrior
B: destroy target creature
"Nyu are you sure these can take on the invaders most of them are made of a shiny substance, not flesh"-Leo to Nyu
3/3
Unstable expirement Green Black
Token creature- Chimera beast
Vanishing X
2/3
Notuka, Fovotan queen 2(B/R)(B/R)(B/R)
Legendary creature- Dragokin warrior
Intimidate, flying
"Why are you worried Leo". "Because we are facing a new threat, unlike the goblins of old".
6/6
Granitecliffs Sentinel 1RB
Creature- dragon
Flying, vigilance
"My dragons should be able to melt this so called "shiny substance". "Good, then we can make use of the substance as well"-Nyu to Leo.
4/4
Granitecliffs shredder 2(B/R)
Creature- Manticore
Flying, intimidate
"Look at this magnificent beast" "Bet you she can take more shiny Walker's than you can" " Well you got yourself a bet"- Leo to Notuka
2/3
Fovotan Sky knight1RR
Creature- Dragokin warrior
Flying, intimidate
"Leo we trained them to intimidate their foes"
3/3
Mytree, Dichila queen2(R/G)(R/G)
Legendary creature- Satyr queen
Dash (R/G)(R/G)(You may cast this spell for its dash cost. If you do, it gains haste, and it's returned from the battlefeild to its owner's hand at the beginning of their next end step) Battalion (if this creature and at least two others attack, all creatures you control gain trample)
"When do you think they will stop besieging our world Triso" " When we fight back and show them we will not give in to their planar invasion"-Mytree to Triso
4/5
Dichila sharpshooter (R/G)(R/G)
Creature- Satyr warrior
Tap: destroy target artifact or deal 1 damage to target creature.
"You two must be strategic about where you put my squadron"Dichila squad leader to Mytree and Leo
1/2
Dichila cavalry 1(R/G)
Creature- Centaur warrior
Dash (you may cast this spell for its dash, if you do this creature gains haste, and it's returned to its owner's from the battlefeild the end of beggining of their next end step)
"Leo where should we place cavalry" "I believe they would be good on the sides so we get the invaders on three sides not just one"
3/3
Dichila ravager (R/G)(R/G)(R/G)
Creature- Minotaur brute
Dash GR ( youay cast this spell for its dash cost, if you do this creature gains haste, and it's returned to its owner's hand at the beggining of their next upkeep)
4/4
Like, take Lorado, which's one of the more popular custom sets. It's a spaghetti western setting, but also thematically goes for the idea of a low-key setting, less focus on magic and monsters and huge, world-changing conflict. It uses renown to carry a theme of 'carving out a name for yourself on the frontier.'
Alternatively, the Kaladesh, which carries overarching themes and moods dealing with wonder and invention and creation.
Your factions also seem very unbalanced. You don't want to mix three-color and two-color and four-color like this, mainly because no one's going to play two color if 3+ color is supported.
I do like the idea of confining a sliver archetype to three colors. But having multiple sliver factions across all five colors means people won't ever stick to the defined factions, and just go for slivers in as many colors as they can get.
Klaus, Vampire general (R/W)(W/B)(W/B)(B/R)(B/R)(B/R)
Legendary creature- Vampire soldier
Haste, raid (when this creature enters the battlefield if you attacked with a creature this turn, kill all creatures with power three or lower), flying
If this creature attacks with one or more creatures all creatures you control gain +2/+0
5/5
Vampire sniper (B/R)(B/R)
Creature- Vampire soldier
Flying, raid ( when this creature enters the battlefield if you attacked with a creature this turn kill target creature)
2/3
Speedy soldier (R/W)(R/W)
Creature- human gunman
Haste, reach
If you cast a creature with haste destroy target permanent
2/3
One eyed Marauder 2RRR
Creature- Cyclops warrior
Raid (when this creature enters the battlefeild, if you attacked this turn all creatures you control and +3/+3
6/6
Colossal swordsman 2RRR
Creature- Giant warrior
Raid (when this creature enters the battlefeild, if you attacked this turn deal five damage to target creature or player)
5/5
Notora, Elven Artificer 2GG
Legendary artifact creature- Elf
Affinity for artifacts (this spell costs 1 less for each artifact you control), Fabricate 5 (when this creature enters the battlefeild you may create five 1/1 colorless servo artifact creature tokens or put five +1/+1 counters on this creature)
3/3
Myr Tyak, myr overseer 2(G/U)(G/U)(G/U)
Legendary artifact creature- Myr
Affinity for artifacts
When this creature enters the battlefeild untap all permanents you control
2/2
Golem Scyo, golem overseer X(U/R)(U/R)(U/R)
Affinity for artifacts
When this card comes into play search your deck for X artifacts where X is the number of mana payed for X
4/4
Sovra, decimator of worlds 11
Legendary artifact creature- Steel Titan
Annihilator 10, affinity for artifacts
11/11
Myr gunner 2
Artifact creature- Myr gunman
Annihilator 2
2/2
Servo crew W
Artifact creature- servo
When this creature crews a vehicle create two 1/1 colorless artifact creature tokens
1/1
Golem soldier 2(G/U)
Artifact creature- golem gunman
Annihilator 3
3/3
LLT R
Artifact creature- vehicle
Crew 1
If this vehicle is crewed by a servo it gains +1/+1
2/2
Shotu and Nyta UUWW(W/U)
Legendary creature- goblin siblings
Fabricate 4
Tap (G/U): sacrifice a servo, create a 2/3 Aithir stoichaeaki artifact creature token with "when this creature enters the battlefeild create two E (energy counters)"
2/3
Ford, the first Aithir Stoichaeaki(2/G)(2/G)
Legendary artifact creature- Elemental
EE: create two 1/1 blue thopters with crew 1
3/3
G.U scholar (W/U)(W/U)
Creature- goblin
Tap: scry 1, draw a card
1/2
Green
A.S creation 1G
Instant
Create two 2/3 green Author stoichaeaki artifact creature tokens with "when this creature enters the battlefield create two E (energy counters)"
Flee 2G
Instant
No damage can be taken from combat this turn
Multicolor
Wild charge 1(R/G)
Instant
Destroy all creatures in combat
Aerial strike (R/W)(R/W)
Sorcery
All deal two damage to all creatures without flying
Colorless
Swarm X
Sorcery
Create X 1/1 colorless sliver creature tokens where X is the number of mana spent to cast this spell
White
Surprise (1/W)
Instant
Kill all attacking creatures
Red
Laser volley RRR
Instant
Deal two damage to each creature you do not control
Blue
Report U
Instant
Show a card from your hand, scry X where X is the converted mana cost of the revealed card
Enlightenment 1U
Sorcery
Scry. X where X is the number of Ustinae you control