I want a card that at the beginning of each upkeep, if a counter has been put or removed from a permanent you control this turn, {EFFECT}.
I know that this has no precendence but I'm interested what a good wording may be?
Eg: Mendmage Lawyer v11WW
Creature - Human Advisor {U}
At the beginning of your end step, if you have put or removed a counter on a permanent you control this turn, you gain 3 life.
2/2
or maybe? Mendmage Lawyer v21WW
Creature - Human Advisor {U}
At the beginning of your end step, if a counter on a permanent you control has been added or removed this turn, you gain 3 life.
2/2
should I use "put" or "added"? Mendmage Lawyer v31WW
Creature - Human Advisor {U}
At the beginning of your end step, if a counter on a permanent you control has been put or removed this turn, you gain 3 life.
2/2
I know that this has no precendence but I'm interested what a good wording may be?
Eg:
Mendmage Lawyer v1 1WW
Creature - Human Advisor {U}
At the beginning of your end step, if you have put or removed a counter on a permanent you control this turn, you gain 3 life.
2/2
or maybe?
Mendmage Lawyer v2 1WW
Creature - Human Advisor {U}
At the beginning of your end step, if a counter on a permanent you control has been added or removed this turn, you gain 3 life.
2/2
should I use "put" or "added"?
Mendmage Lawyer v3 1WW
Creature - Human Advisor {U}
At the beginning of your end step, if a counter on a permanent you control has been put or removed this turn, you gain 3 life.
2/2
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