@Hanslineman: Helix Pinnacle would like to show you how wrong you are.
Jaya: eh. This feels worse than the creature version, despite having three of the same abilities. Not very imaginative either. 5/10
Goblin that cares about multicolor:
Coalition GruntRB
Creature- Goblin Warrior Domain - At the beginning of your upkeep, if Coalition Grunt is in your graveyard and you control a basic land of each type, put Coalition Grunt onto the battlefield.
2/2
Jaya Ballard: Honestly, not an exciting card for me. There aren't even many wall cards any more. At least the first ability is a "You may" effect. 5/10
(Edit)Coalition Grunt: wow, that's a pretty good card. simple, balanced, and yet abuse-able. 10/10
Goblin Representative 2R
Creature - Goblin Adviser
Whenever a player plays a spell that is white, blue, black, or green, ~ gets +2/+2 until end of turn.
~ has intimidate as long as you control a multicolor permanent.
1/2
Next: Make a non-red card that has a lot of potential for raw simple damage. (feel free to interpret those words any way you choose)
Edit: I was afraid of that. . .
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Inferno
"Some have said there is no subtlety to destruction. You know what? They're dead."
-Jaya Ballard, task mage
Representative- you may have critiqued the card, but you fail to fulfill the request, and hoser in green. that doesn't hose anything, nor is it green. 0/10
a non-red raw damage? Savage Ordeal :3mana::symg::symg:
Instant
~ deals X damage to target player where X is the number of Beasts you control.
Retrace
"Welcome to the jungle." -Jolrael, Empress of Beasts
next- a :0mana:-drop Pact-Legend in any color.
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SELVAXRI! King of Misfortune & Master of Rocket Launchers "Do ya feel lucky? Because you'd better start runnin' while you still can." 375 Misfortune {+3 signed AP's} & 104 Rocket Launcher (41 AQ/ 63 Rev) Edgar Rice Burroughs, forgotten legend of the word.
Savage Ordeal: Green direct damage? Really? You were better at this Selv... 5/10.
Merging two requests.
Okanue, Unleashed Force Cost: 0
Legendary Creature - Elemental
Trample, Forestwalk, Echo 1GGG
Okanue, Unleashed Force is green.
When Okanue, Unleashed Force becomes blocked, it gets +1/+1 until the end of the turn for each creature blocking it.
5/2
Next: An aura with Unearth.
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Okanue, Unleashed Force - I like it. Powerful, not overly so, I would play this in a lot of decks. The only thing is that it doesn't feel really legendary. Also maybe change echo to the 'at the beginning of your upkeep' thing. Feels more pact-ish. 9/10
Zombie's Grip2B
Enchantment - Aura
Enchant creature
Whenever a creature dealt damage by enchanted creature would be put into the graveyard from play, exile it and put a 2/2 zombie creature token into play under your control.
Unearth 4B
NC: A card that gets more powerful with more -1/-1 counters on it.
Zombie's Grip:2mana::symb:
Enchantment - Aura
Enchant creature
Whenever a creature dealt damage by enchanted creature would be put into the graveyard from play, exile it and put a 2/2 zombie creature token into play under your control.
Unearth :4mana::symb:
Interesting card but doesn't explain how unearth would work in an enchantment. It's a cool concept. 80 B
NC: A card that gets more powerful with more -1/-1 counters on it.
Pain ReverserXB
Creature - Human Vampire
~ enters the battlefield with X -1/-1 counters.
~ is not destroyed by having 0 or less toughness B, Sacrifice ~: ~ deals damage to target player equal to the number of -1/-1 counters on it
1/1
Next: A 1/1
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Multicolored millcards in something other than dimir.
Path Reverser: Weird Templating, good Idea love the X creature cost. 9/10
Vengeful Mastermind UUB
Creature - Human Wizard
Whenever you draw a card and it is not the first card you have drawn this turn, put a charge counter onto ~
Other creatures get -0/-X where X is equal to the number of charge counters on ~
When ~ has more than 3 charge counters on it, sacrifice it.
1/1
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EllE:
Because she's the hero standard deserves, but not the one it needs right now... and so we'll chase her... because she can take it... because she's not a hero... she's a silent guardian
Hajin Warhound: Pretty much always worse than boros swiftblade. Kind of uninspired from you, not your best work. 7/10 Vengeful Mastermind This card is really odd, it's really easy to abuse it (just use divination once, and some other card draw and you can really slow down the battlefield.). It fits the challenge, but thats about it. 5/10
An aura with 'enchant land or artifact' Empower Stone3R
Enchantment - Aura
Enchant land or artifact
Enchanted land or artifact loses all abilities and is an X/X creature, where X is the number of lands you control.
NC: Rhadha, Planeswalker. (yes i know she lost her spark, but I COMMAND YOU TO DO IT :P)
8/10 - That's around what I would have done.
Radha, Keldon WarlordRG
Planeswalker - Radha +1: Put a 1/1 red Human Warrior creature token onto the battlefield with "this creature attacks each turn if able". It gains haste until end of turn. +1: Target creature gets +2/+2 and must be blocked this turn if able. -4: Untap each creature you control. After this main phase there is an additional combat phase followed by an additional main phase. <2>
Next: Make a card based on something you can see from where you're sitting.
Radha, Keldon Warlord 9/10 I would love to see a cheap planeswalker and one that gets you more than one combat phase is awesome. The only reason I don't think she is broken for having her ultimate costing 4 is there is so much cheap burn and agro, if it was any other time in Standard I would say it should cost more.
Stuffed Panda Bear
Artifact Creature-Bear
Sacrifice ~:Prevent the next 1 damage dealt to you this turn. A gift form a former "Spark."
0/1
Next card: Something that would make a vorthos pee his/her pants in glee, or outrage.
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Stuffed Panda Bear: another card for an artifact deck to abuse. I like it. 10/10
I honestly don't think I can do this challenge justice, but I'll try.
Yawgmoth BBBBBB
Planeswalker - Yawgmoth
+2: Target creature becomes an artifact in addition to it's other types and gets +2/+0 until end of turn.
0: All lands in play become swamps until end of turn.
-1: Destroy target non-black creature. It can't be regenerated.
-8: put 6 4/4 black horror creature tokens into play with intimidate.
<5>
Next: make a card based on someone you know. (you don't have to use their name or anything like that)
Solid. Would have preferred going the outrage route, but that's just me. 8/10
Song of the Emo2BR
Legendary Enchanment
During your upkeep, sacrifice a permanent you control. If you don' sacrifice Song of the Emo.
Creatures your opponents control do not untap during their controller's untap step. 2/2/: Untap all creatures you control. They all deal 2 damage to themselves. Any player may play this ability.My My soul is like a dark pit, going down down down into eternal darkness.
@Tenx, I think it would make vorthos outraged. Yawgmoth is dead, and was never a planeswalker. And about the card... I dunno. I don't really like it. I guess its flavorful, but I don't think anybody would play that card. 5.5/10
Infuriating Licid1RB
Creature - Licid (R/B),T: ~ Licid loses this ability and becomes an Aura enchantment with enchant creature. Attach it to target creature. You may pay (R/B) to end this effect.
Enchanted creature has +1/+0 and intimidate
1/1
@Explosive Donut: Actually, Yawgmoth is not dead. Karona spoke to him in the Scourge novel: go check out the page in the forums for specifics.
Infuriating Licid: Classic, follows the basic layout with the 'revert to original' part in it. Even able to be common, IMO 9/10
Stave the WoundsW
Tribal Instant - Cleric
Prevent all damage dealt to target Cleric you control this turn.
Whenever a Cleric is put into the graveyard from play the battlefield (oops, old habit), return Stave the Wounds to your hand.
Next: A blue ouphe that bothers spells in a similar means as Brown Ouphe does artifacts.
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"Of all tyrannies, a tyranny sincerely exercised for the good of its victims may be the most oppressive. It would be better to live under robber barons than under omnipotent moral busybodies. The robber baron's cruelty may sometimes sleep, his cupidity may at some point be satiated; but those who torment us for our own good will torment us without end for they do so with the approval of their own conscience."
-C.S. Lewis
@kuvien, I thought he was dead, that was that whole "Urborg, Tomb of Yawgmoth" card. That and wasn't Karona all caught up with the crazy around then and saw a bunch of stuff that didn't actually happen?
Stave the Wounds: A common instant for W is not exactly powerful. Also, clerics pretty much have many damage prevention abilities already. This card would seem redundant... 6/10
Grey Ouphe
Cost: U
Creature - Ouphe 1U,T: Counter target instant or sorcery spell unless it's controller pays 1.
1/1
Next: I want a 8/1 named after a rock band.
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[b]Megadeth[/b] :1mana::symb::symr::symg:
Legendary Creature- Human Musician 8/1
Haste, Trample, Protection from Emo
If you control a creature named [b]Metallica[/b], or if you're listening to Metallica, sacrifice ~.
As long as you're listening to any Megadeth song, ~ gets +1/+1.
next- a drop Enchantment.
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SELVAXRI! King of Misfortune & Master of Rocket Launchers "Do ya feel lucky? Because you'd better start runnin' while you still can." 375 Misfortune {+3 signed AP's} & 104 Rocket Launcher (41 AQ/ 63 Rev) Edgar Rice Burroughs, forgotten legend of the word.
Megadeth :1mana::symb::symr::symg:
Legendary Creature- Human Musician 8/1
Haste, Trample, Protection from Emo
If you control a creature named Metallica, or if you're listening to Metallica, sacrifice ~.
As long as you're listening to any Megadeth song, ~ gets +1/+1.
As an UN-card, I can't give this a proper rating. Even as an un-card, it's not very funny. 2/10 for an un-card that isn't funny.
next- a drop Enchantment.
Flash Bond0
Enchantment - Aura
Flash
~ is white
Enchanted creature gets +1/+1
Next: A 1/1
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Flash Bond: Actually, not terrible. Even at zero and no drawback, AND instant speed, I do not see it as broken or even tier 1-able. 10/10
Whelp of Kher KeepRR
Creature - Dragon
A deck can have any number of cards named Whelp of Kher Keep.
Flying, Bands with other Dragons
1/1
Next: Make a card of Tabernacle proportions for Kher Keep (better than its prime, if you must!).
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"Of all tyrannies, a tyranny sincerely exercised for the good of its victims may be the most oppressive. It would be better to live under robber barons than under omnipotent moral busybodies. The robber baron's cruelty may sometimes sleep, his cupidity may at some point be satiated; but those who torment us for our own good will torment us without end for they do so with the approval of their own conscience."
-C.S. Lewis
Before I go on, I just want to apologies about the Yawgmoth card. I should have made a card based on something I was more familiar with.
Whelp of Kher Keep: Interesting. It's not as bad as relentless rats. 7/10
again, I'm not entirely sure what you mean by Tabernacle proportions, but I'll try.
Under Every Hole 1RR
Enchantment
All lands you control have "2R,T: Put a 0/1 red Kobold creature token into play."
All Kobold creatures get +1/+1.
Next: A dragon that makes other dragons stronger.
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Inferno
"Some have said there is no subtlety to destruction. You know what? They're dead."
-Jaya Ballard, task mage
Armorer Dragon: Nothing wrong with the occasional white dragon, but cards that play into a dragon theme should probably always be red or red/black. Other than that I like, though I'm unsure about a reusable 4 mana: gain 10-15 life ability, even if it'd mainly only happen in casual. 6/10
Living Thicket1GG
Creature - Plant
Defender
Whenever Living Thicket blocks, put a 1/1 squirrel token onto the battlefield.
0/5
Armored Dragon is sick (on its own I like it), almost broken for DragonStorm Combos...LIFELINK! on a Hellkite, I'm worried about big dragons beating my face with pump and lifelink....8/10
well I did this guy:
Kashalla, the Razorshield :4mana::symw::symw::symg::symg:
Legendary Creature - Cat Warrior Spirit (MR)
First Strike, Defender, Lifelink, Vigilance, Protection from Black
Whenever Kashalla blocks, it loses defender until the end of your next turn. "The shield covered in claws might not be a shield at all."
7/8
and then I did this guy
Umberosk, the Psychic Cage :3mana::symwu::symwu::symwu::symwu:
Legendary Creature - Wizard Spirit (MR)
Flying, Shroud, Defender
Whenever Umberosk blocks, draw a card.
The total combined power of creatures attacking you
cannot exceed the number of cards in your hand, and
the power of attacking creatures cannot be increased
by spells or abilities. "Unless you can conquer his mind, you will never conquer his body."
3/7
but, I'll try once again to make a good defender
Necromantic Vortex2UB
Creature - Elemental (C)
Flying, Defender
When Necromantic Vortex blocks a creature, return that
creature to it's owners hand.
When Necromantic Vortex is put into a graveyard from the
battlefield, target opponent sacrifices a creature.
0/3
**NATH'D
Living Thicket:
Squirrels love you. Could get absurd though, with something like coat of arms, or even Doubling Season. 9/10
Red convoke: Orcish Blastwave2RRR
Instant (U)
Convoke
Orcish Blastwave deals 5 damage to target creature or player
and 3 damage to you.
My Trading Post
http://forums.mtgsalvation.com/showthread.php?t=226506
Jaya: eh. This feels worse than the creature version, despite having three of the same abilities. Not very imaginative either. 5/10
Goblin that cares about multicolor:
Coalition Grunt RB
Creature- Goblin Warrior
Domain - At the beginning of your upkeep, if Coalition Grunt is in your graveyard and you control a basic land of each type, put Coalition Grunt onto the battlefield.
2/2
Next: A good color hoser in green.
(Edit)Coalition Grunt: wow, that's a pretty good card. simple, balanced, and yet abuse-able. 10/10
Goblin Representative 2R
Creature - Goblin Adviser
Whenever a player plays a spell that is white, blue, black, or green, ~ gets +2/+2 until end of turn.
~ has intimidate as long as you control a multicolor permanent.
1/2
Next: Make a non-red card that has a lot of potential for raw simple damage. (feel free to interpret those words any way you choose)
Edit: I was afraid of that. . .
"Some have said there is no subtlety to destruction. You know what? They're dead."
-Jaya Ballard, task mage
ヾ(`д´)ゝI challenge you!
Current favorite decks to play:
Landfall with admonition angel Roil Elemental and Avenger of zendikar GWU
Jund Burn GRB
a non-red raw damage?
Savage Ordeal :3mana::symg::symg:
Instant
~ deals X damage to target player where X is the number of Beasts you control.
Retrace
"Welcome to the jungle." -Jolrael, Empress of Beasts
next- a :0mana:-drop Pact-Legend in any color.
King of Misfortune & Master of Rocket Launchers
"Do ya feel lucky? Because you'd better start runnin' while you still can."
375 Misfortune {+3 signed AP's} & 104 Rocket Launcher (41 AQ/ 63 Rev)
Edgar Rice Burroughs, forgotten legend of the word.
Merging two requests.
Okanue, Unleashed Force
Cost: 0
Legendary Creature - Elemental
Trample, Forestwalk, Echo 1GGG
Okanue, Unleashed Force is green.
When Okanue, Unleashed Force becomes blocked, it gets +1/+1 until the end of the turn for each creature blocking it.
5/2
Next: An aura with Unearth.
Zombie's Grip2B
Enchantment - Aura
Enchant creature
Whenever a creature dealt damage by enchanted creature would be put into the graveyard from play, exile it and put a 2/2 zombie creature token into play under your control.
Unearth 4B
NC: A card that gets more powerful with more -1/-1 counters on it.
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Pain Reverser XB
Creature - Human Vampire
~ enters the battlefield with X -1/-1 counters.
~ is not destroyed by having 0 or less toughness
B, Sacrifice ~: ~ deals damage to target player equal to the number of -1/-1 counters on it
1/1
Next: A 1/1
Multicolored millcards in something other than dimir.
Vengeful Mastermind UUB
Creature - Human Wizard
Whenever you draw a card and it is not the first card you have drawn this turn, put a charge counter onto ~
Other creatures get -0/-X where X is equal to the number of charge counters on ~
When ~ has more than 3 charge counters on it, sacrifice it.
1/1
EllE:
Hajin Warhound
Cost: (2/W)(2/R)
Creature - Hound
Double strike
1/1
Next: An aura with 'enchant land or artifact'
Vengeful Mastermind This card is really odd, it's really easy to abuse it (just use divination once, and some other card draw and you can really slow down the battlefield.). It fits the challenge, but thats about it. 5/10
An aura with 'enchant land or artifact'
Empower Stone 3R
Enchantment - Aura
Enchant land or artifact
Enchanted land or artifact loses all abilities and is an X/X creature, where X is the number of lands you control.
NC: Rhadha, Planeswalker. (yes i know she lost her spark, but I COMMAND YOU TO DO IT :P)
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Radha, Keldon Warlord RG
Planeswalker - Radha
+1: Put a 1/1 red Human Warrior creature token onto the battlefield with "this creature attacks each turn if able". It gains haste until end of turn.
+1: Target creature gets +2/+2 and must be blocked this turn if able.
-4: Untap each creature you control. After this main phase there is an additional combat phase followed by an additional main phase.
<2>
Next: Make a card based on something you can see from where you're sitting.
Stuffed Panda Bear
Artifact Creature-Bear
Sacrifice ~:Prevent the next 1 damage dealt to you this turn.
A gift form a former "Spark."
0/1
Next card: Something that would make a vorthos pee his/her pants in glee, or outrage.
I honestly don't think I can do this challenge justice, but I'll try.
Yawgmoth BBBBBB
Planeswalker - Yawgmoth
+2: Target creature becomes an artifact in addition to it's other types and gets +2/+0 until end of turn.
0: All lands in play become swamps until end of turn.
-1: Destroy target non-black creature. It can't be regenerated.
-8: put 6 4/4 black horror creature tokens into play with intimidate.
<5>
Next: make a card based on someone you know. (you don't have to use their name or anything like that)
"Some have said there is no subtlety to destruction. You know what? They're dead."
-Jaya Ballard, task mage
ヾ(`д´)ゝI challenge you!
Current favorite decks to play:
Landfall with admonition angel Roil Elemental and Avenger of zendikar GWU
Jund Burn GRB
Song of the Emo2BR
Legendary Enchanment
During your upkeep, sacrifice a permanent you control. If you don' sacrifice Song of the Emo.
Creatures your opponents control do not untap during their controller's untap step.
2/2/: Untap all creatures you control. They all deal 2 damage to themselves. Any player may play this ability.My
My soul is like a dark pit, going down down down into eternal darkness.
Next: Make a Licid
Infuriating Licid 1RB
Creature - Licid
(R/B),T: ~ Licid loses this ability and becomes an Aura enchantment with enchant creature. Attach it to target creature. You may pay (R/B) to end this effect.
Enchanted creature has +1/+0 and intimidate
1/1
NC: Make me a powerful "tribal instant - cleric."
MTG Rules adviser.
Infuriating Licid: Classic, follows the basic layout with the 'revert to original' part in it. Even able to be common, IMO 9/10
Stave the Wounds W
Tribal Instant - Cleric
Prevent all damage dealt to target Cleric you control this turn.
Whenever a Cleric is put into the graveyard from
playthe battlefield (oops, old habit), return Stave the Wounds to your hand.Next: A blue ouphe that bothers spells in a similar means as Brown Ouphe does artifacts.
-C.S. Lewis
EDH
Obzedat - Still Alive
Retired - Nicol Bolas
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Grey Ouphe
Cost: U
Creature - Ouphe
1U,T: Counter target instant or sorcery spell unless it's controller pays 1.
1/1
Next: I want a 8/1 named after a rock band.
[b]Grey Ouphe[b] Weaker than Spiketail hatchling. good attempt though. 6/10
[b]Megadeth[/b] :1mana::symb::symr::symg:
Legendary Creature- Human Musician 8/1
Haste, Trample, Protection from Emo
If you control a creature named [b]Metallica[/b], or if you're listening to Metallica, sacrifice ~.
As long as you're listening to any Megadeth song, ~ gets +1/+1.
next- a drop Enchantment.
King of Misfortune & Master of Rocket Launchers
"Do ya feel lucky? Because you'd better start runnin' while you still can."
375 Misfortune {+3 signed AP's} & 104 Rocket Launcher (41 AQ/ 63 Rev)
Edgar Rice Burroughs, forgotten legend of the word.
Flash Bond 0
Enchantment - Aura
Flash
~ is white
Enchanted creature gets +1/+1
Next: A 1/1
Multicolored millcards in something other than dimir.
Whelp of Kher Keep RR
Creature - Dragon
A deck can have any number of cards named Whelp of Kher Keep.
Flying, Bands with other Dragons
1/1
Next: Make a card of Tabernacle proportions for Kher Keep (better than its prime, if you must!).
-C.S. Lewis
EDH
Obzedat - Still Alive
Retired - Nicol Bolas
Whelp of Kher Keep: Interesting. It's not as bad as relentless rats. 7/10
again, I'm not entirely sure what you mean by Tabernacle proportions, but I'll try.
Under Every Hole 1RR
Enchantment
All lands you control have "2R,T: Put a 0/1 red Kobold creature token into play."
All Kobold creatures get +1/+1.
Next: A dragon that makes other dragons stronger.
"Some have said there is no subtlety to destruction. You know what? They're dead."
-Jaya Ballard, task mage
ヾ(`д´)ゝI challenge you!
Current favorite decks to play:
Landfall with admonition angel Roil Elemental and Avenger of zendikar GWU
Jund Burn GRB
Armorer Dragon 4WR
Creature- Dragon Soldier
Flying, vigilance
2WR: Dragons you control get +1/+0 and lifelink until end of turn.
4/4
Next:
A fun and/or powerful creature with defender.
Living Thicket 1GG
Creature - Plant
Defender
Whenever Living Thicket blocks, put a 1/1 squirrel token onto the battlefield.
0/5
Next: A mono-red spell with Convoke.
well I did this guy:
and then I did this guy
but, I'll try once again to make a good defender
Necromantic Vortex 2UB
Creature - Elemental (C)
Flying, Defender
When Necromantic Vortex blocks a creature, return that
creature to it's owners hand.
When Necromantic Vortex is put into a graveyard from the
battlefield, target opponent sacrifices a creature.
0/3
**NATH'D
Living Thicket:
Squirrels love you. Could get absurd though, with something like coat of arms, or even Doubling Season. 9/10
Red convoke:
Orcish Blastwave 2RRR
Instant (U)
Convoke
Orcish Blastwave deals 5 damage to target creature or player
and 3 damage to you.
next: a enchantment with flashback
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are we bound to prosperity and ruin.”
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