Hi everyone. So, I put together a construct tribal commander deck, which can be found over here. However, none of the existing commanders meshed with the vision I had for the deck, which was to either go wide in a unique way. After much brainstorming, this is the design I came up with. Personally, I think it's hilarious.
United Gearhulk5 Legendary Artifact Creature - Construct
United Gearhulk is all colors.
flash, vigilance, first strike, trample, menace
Champion five Constructs
10/10
The idea is that you literally fuse five robots together into one giant one ala Voltron. The five keywords come from the Gearhulk cycle, which is a focal point of the deck. They make great targets for the ability as well, since you can reuse their ETB effects if the United Gearhulk dies. My playgroup has basically already approved this version, but I'd appreciate any feedback on the design you might have. I also have a render if you guys want to see that.
Needs colored mana symbols. Just because its all colors does not mean you can play spells with symbols in them.
I am not sure what this means. Are you saying that this general doesn't allow the pilot to play colored spells just because it doesn't have any mana symbols in the cost? If so, that isn't true. The deckbuilding construction rules of EDH say that the only cards that can be included in a deck are those that fall within the color identity of the general. This general, being all 5 colors, has a color identity of all 5 colors and can thus play spells of any color. See this rule:
903.4. The Commander variant uses color identity to determine what cards can be in a deck with a certain commander. The color identity of a card is the color or colors of any mana symbols in that card’s mana cost or rules text, plus any colors defined by its characteristic-defining abilities (see rule 604.3) or color indicator (see rule 204).
Regarding the card in question; you don't really need to say it is all colors. If it were printed, it would actually just be printed with a Color Indicator of all 5 colors (see Transguild Courier). Granted, this is hard to convey in text so your current wording is fine.
I am not sure of the power level though. Due to the number of low cost Constructs, and Shapeshifters with Changeling, I could see this easily coming down turn 5 consistently with very little lost. Playtesting will show whether this is a legitimate concern, but I could see the Mana Cost going up to 7 or 8 and then changing the power and toughness to 7/7 or 8/8. 10/10 seems high for something that can come down turn 5 and has 2 forms of evasion.
I personally like a 7/7 for 7 due partly to the aesthetic of the card but then it is still a 3 turn clock. 10/10 just seems overwhelming that early on.
United Gearhulk 5
Legendary Artifact Creature - Construct
United Gearhulk is all colors.
flash, vigilance, first strike, trample, menace
Champion five Constructs
10/10
The idea is that you literally fuse five robots together into one giant one ala Voltron. The five keywords come from the Gearhulk cycle, which is a focal point of the deck. They make great targets for the ability as well, since you can reuse their ETB effects if the United Gearhulk dies. My playgroup has basically already approved this version, but I'd appreciate any feedback on the design you might have. I also have a render if you guys want to see that.
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Regarding the card in question; you don't really need to say it is all colors. If it were printed, it would actually just be printed with a Color Indicator of all 5 colors (see Transguild Courier). Granted, this is hard to convey in text so your current wording is fine.
I am not sure of the power level though. Due to the number of low cost Constructs, and Shapeshifters with Changeling, I could see this easily coming down turn 5 consistently with very little lost. Playtesting will show whether this is a legitimate concern, but I could see the Mana Cost going up to 7 or 8 and then changing the power and toughness to 7/7 or 8/8. 10/10 seems high for something that can come down turn 5 and has 2 forms of evasion.
I personally like a 7/7 for 7 due partly to the aesthetic of the card but then it is still a 3 turn clock. 10/10 just seems overwhelming that early on.