Reasons this does not feel believable: MTG Cardsmith quality card render. No artist credit. Not a good use of multicolor on the two cards for different reasons.
Of the two cards the one with multicolored activation cost feels better, but overall the abilities seem a little disjointed and it is hard to imagine a set where all piecs would fall in place to justify a card like this.
The general idea to move around Auras and create tokens to move them to makes sense, but this card wants a really dedicated enchantment theme AND emphasis on bounce at least as a subtheme - just to justify the second ability. Yet the interaction with the first ability is tenuous even if tokens and Aura shifting in general would make sense. This card needs to narrow down what it wants to do and go more directly for it.
Please provide text cards in the future for more detailed feedback.
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Planar Chaos was not a mistake neither was it random. You might want to look at it again.
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cards that inspired the card. azorius aethermage, stonybrook schoolmaster, simic guildmage, god-favored general and myrsmith
Of the two cards the one with multicolored activation cost feels better, but overall the abilities seem a little disjointed and it is hard to imagine a set where all piecs would fall in place to justify a card like this.
The general idea to move around Auras and create tokens to move them to makes sense, but this card wants a really dedicated enchantment theme AND emphasis on bounce at least as a subtheme - just to justify the second ability. Yet the interaction with the first ability is tenuous even if tokens and Aura shifting in general would make sense. This card needs to narrow down what it wants to do and go more directly for it.
Please provide text cards in the future for more detailed feedback.
Finally a good white villain quote: "So, do I ever re-evaluate my life choices? Never, because I know what I'm doing is a righteous cause."
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