Can't say anything about the wording, but the template looks OK. One problem, though:
Change the font of the card-name. It's terribly hard to read - is it deacan, deacon, Oeacan? It's already hard enough to decipher the bolded text in the first line, but the card-name is even worse.
Craven and others, what I'm saying is that card I did not make, I want to know if someone here could make a blank card template that looks like that, that I could use for my card game. That card is an example of what the blank frame should look like, it is not what I'm using.